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• Post your sheets here to be considered for the update. We will provide feedback here, you'll respond accordingly, and we'll approve and accept. Check back regularly if you submit something to have the most chance of it being accepted!
• Since this has a strict deadline, we can't guarantee that every sheet submitted here will be included, but we will try our best to get in as many as we can!  If it ends up being too much, we will prioritise as best we can and any unfinished sheets can still be submitted through the normal process.
• Sheets for this update should be related to the theme of Food/Cooking.  We won't have any super strict guidelines for this, but please try to keep it reasonable and on theme.  In general though, this means that the sheets should play during a food or cooking related event, or have a food/cooking related name.
• We'll need to receive submissions no later than (February 9th) so that we have enough time to check the sheets!

• [N64] Pokémon Stadium - "Sushi-Go-Round" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpJQxX7iUro) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Peanut Plain" (Replacement) (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZa8b-5oX1s) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Maelstrom)

• [NES] Kirby's Adventure - "Yogurt Yard Map" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oONRTxBjNz8&list=PL69F8D339668AF3E3&index=20) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Acorn Plains" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4c-D_WiS7SU) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GB] The Final Fantasy Legend - "Eat the Meat" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZzzkc--UjY) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Dreaming of Food" (https://youtu.be/-1UB4eqW5Ds) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [N64] Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards - "Goal Game" (https://youtu.be/MXT1KXfBago) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GBA] Kirby & The Amazing Mirror - "Radish Ruins" (https://youtu.be/4_tF7BcGCok) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Crash! Gourmet Race" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=caw5Ft4UfM8) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GB] Kirby's Block Ball - "Cappy's Stage (Stage 1)" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWQE9AaJ70o) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Vanilla Lake (Beta)" (https://youtu.be/lK-PG98e2t4) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Choco Island" (Replacement) (https://youtu.be/tX2b-ppv-bE) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Let's Go Down the Wine River" (Replacement) (https://youtu.be/esK671c4B4M) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GB] The Smurfs' Nightmare - "Funny Funny (The Kitchen of Danger)" (https://youtu.be/Iryd4Gj9ghA) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [GCN] Animal Crossing - "K.K. Salsa" (https://youtu.be/_Y4DD6bCOtM) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Squashini" (https://youtu.be/ZpLciO1-lSo) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [Wii] Wario Land: Shake It! - "Large Fry Cook-Off" (https://youtu.be/oKeriPF_6bU) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [ARCADE] Pac-Man - "Start (https://youtu.be/HwyAwPLHqnM) & Coffee Break Music" (https://youtu.be/18Kr8MSv56k) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [PC] Diner Dash: Hometown Hero - "Florence's Groovy Disco" (https://youtu.be/l7MAEvkfQD0) (Approved by Maelstrom, accepted by Latios)
• [SNES] Final Fantasy VI - "Spinach Rag" (https://youtu.be/EmAH9XcDKb8) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Latios)
• [PS1] Final Fantasy VII - "Under the Rotting Pizza" (https://youtu.be/J8o9gGOKEg4) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [PS1] Final Fantasy VIII - "The Salt Flats" (https://youtu.be/v0JU76yuY58) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)

• [PS2] Dragon Quest VIII: Journey of the Cursed King - "Alchemy Pot" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrLwmkSs5R4) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Static)

• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Gourmet Race" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se1uh3PS78Y) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [NDS] Kirby Mass Attack - "Fun Castle" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PK32sAEnimc) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Static)
• [SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Teatime Joy" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FSP9bPRDGHw) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [SWITCH] Super Mario Odyssey - "Peronza Plaza" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKUFFiZXuE8) (Approved by Static, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [WiiU] Yoshi's Woolly World - "Yoshi and Cookies" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TT4mu-XWIlo) (Approved by Static, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [NDS] Cooking Mama - "Title Screen" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hu84AJmn43I) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Static)
• [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Working Dough" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12jVfXFKyBY) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Title Screen" (Replacement) (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zr9que9yyTs&spfreload=10) (Approved by Static, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Dangerous Dinner" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fMQHNR5mtjo) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Maelstrom)

• [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Treat Land" (https://youtu.be/92T-fDW9xAw) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GBA] Kirby & The Amazing Mirror - "Olive Ocean" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKYL3rCOaQg) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Meringue Clouds" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nrLTkp3QCXc) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Static)
• [3DS] Kirby: Planet Robobot - "Time for Dessert!" (https://downloads.khinsider.com/game-soundtracks/album/kirby-planet-robobot-original-soundtrack/23%2520Time%2520for%2520Dessert%2521.mp3) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [WiiU] Mario Kart 8 - Sweet Sweet Canyon" (https://youtu.be/de1VzbiLRnU) (Approved by mastersuperfan, accepted by Static)

• [N64] Banjo-Tooie - "Honey B's Hive" (https://youtu.be/Tkw4IEPH6tY) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [Wii] Mario Kart Wii - "Maple Treeway" (https://youtu.be/lLn9__8SSTk) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Cooking With Zess T." (https://youtu.be/TfVTGxhzGDE) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Hungry March" (https://youtu.be/IEj1GLAjRNU) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Static)
• [3DS] Fire Emblem Awakening - "'Agh! Won goph in mah mouph! Blech! Ptooey!'" (https://youtu.be/DlpdJ-0Ko8Q) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)
• [3DS] Fire Emblem Fates - "Fantastical Feast" (https://youtu.be/mRRSWC60eoY) (Approved by Static, accepted by mastersuperfan)

• [GCN] Animal Crossing - "K.K. Gumbo" (https://youtu.be/RJ50YpdaFR0) (Approved by Static, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [MUL] Monster Hunter - "BBQ Spit" (https://youtu.be/T2EIQ8vb79Q) (Approved by Latios, Accepted by Static)
• [Wii] Wii Fit - "BMI Results" (Replaces Normal Weight/Overweight) (https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLJrsIgUR-s40NNaDT1O6JUyk0UDBmXBmB) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)
• [MUL] Monster Hunter Generations - "Proudly Serving Fondue, Bon Appétit ~ Ingredient Selection!" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbvdJM3oMY4) (Approved by Latios, accepted by mastersuperfan)

• [MUL] Persona 5 - "Big Bang Burger March" (https://youtu.be/nbyLQggVGIc) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Static)
• [Wii] Harvest Moon: Tree of Tranquility - "Cooking" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y5hwY5hrfmY) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)
• [MUL] Stardew Valley - "Frozen Pizza and Eggs (Shane's Theme)" (https://youtu.be/dV2OjLZwiLA) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [PC] Touhou 3: Phantasmagoria of Dim. Dream - "Strawberry Crisis!!" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UTLqnME57vo) (Approved by Static, accepted by mastersuperfan)

• [NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness - "Apple Woods" (Replacement) (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkU0ERRXCCs) (Approved by Static, accepted by Maelstrom)

• [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Link's Memories: 'Silent Princess'" (https://youtu.be/GCe7noVKujg) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [NDS] Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time - "Yoob's Belly" (https://youtu.be/E6po8vIfZHg) (Approved by Static, accepted by Latios)

• [NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Trials and Tribulations - "Godot ~ The Fragrance of Dark Coffee" (Replacement) (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGcyKEZtWuE) (Approved by Latios, accepted by Maelstrom)
• [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Egg Engines" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jVZ7wWf5q0) (Approved by Maelstrom, accepted by Latios)

• [WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Soda Jungle" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JigVt4w0vc)

Quote from: Yug_Guy on February 28, 2019, 04:46:06 PMCooking Mama arrangement project when?

Quote from: Yug_Guy on January 26, 2020, 02:42:30 PM

Quote from: Yug_Guy on February 28, 2019, 04:46:06 PMCooking Mama arrangement project when?

Also, this is still very much on the table.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 26, 2020, 03:03:40 PMWhich ones are you doing? I'll let you know which ones I'm working on as I do them

• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Vanilla Lake" (Beta) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6i3fGvW_38Vdmg1XzM4Ym9xSDg)
• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Choco Island" (Replacement) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1maycX3J0L0ohxDNVlWrD3tn5sLCBKIun)
• [SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Let's Go Down the Wine River" (Replacement) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6i3fGvW_38VaW9xOGdSRkRCQlE)
• [GB] The Smurfs' Nightmare - "Funny Funny (The Kitchen of Danger)" (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1UzttS1vH6xEYGJFMNWmH9obAwU-7ToMW)
• [GCN] Animal Crossing - "K.K. Salsa" (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1hP63vks2kmZVWlYLEEF0B50epu2Tgk13)
• [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Squashini" (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1UzttS1vH6xEYGJFMNWmH9obAwU-7ToMW)

Quote from: Static on January 26, 2020, 08:03:04 PMI'm fine with using either sheet as the update goes forward, but I figured I'd post mine here anyways.

Quote from: Static on January 26, 2020, 08:03:04 PMEdit: Well, I was finishing up my arrangement and typing up this post at around the same time you posted yours here, NineLives - I didn't expect both of us to do it lol
I'm fine with using either sheet as the update goes forward, but I figured I'd post mine here anyways.

Quote from: Maelstrom on January 26, 2020, 09:35:23 PMUmineko When They Cry - Fishy Aroma

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 26, 2020, 04:31:45 PM- [NES] Kirby's Adventure - "Yogurt Yard Map"

Quote from: Maelstrom on January 26, 2020, 09:35:23 PMUmineko When They Cry - Fishy Aroma

Quote from: McDucky on January 27, 2020, 12:33:59 PMI don't think it fits the theme, unfortunately.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 27, 2020, 03:49:21 PMRegarding Choco Island: I'd suggest that we go with Static's. Don't mean that in any bad way for NineLives - just that it'd take a significant amount of work to get it up to a level comparable to Static's.

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 26, 2020, 04:31:45 PM-[WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Acorn Plains

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 26, 2020, 04:31:45 PM- [GB] The Final Fantasy Legend - "Eat the Meat"

Quote from: Latios212 on January 27, 2020, 04:23:39 PMGot a link to the (non-extended) original? This one I found (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XywJTPQaCxE) is labeled under a different game

Quote from: Latios212 on January 27, 2020, 04:23:39 PMLooks good! Just a couple small things.
- I recommend against condensing beats 1.5-2 and 3.5-4 into quarter rests in the LH (in m. 5 and such) as they obscure the downbeat and make reading along with the RH a bit harder.
- I don't think the bass plays on beat 3.5 in m. 13/15.

• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Gourmet Race" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se1uh3PS78Y)
• [NDS] Kirby Mass Attack - "Fun Castle" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PK32sAEnimc) < Static reminded me that the castle is made out of food haha
• [SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Teatime Joy" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FSP9bPRDGHw)
• [SWITCH] Super Mario Odyssey - "Peronza Plaza" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKUFFiZXuE8)

• [WiiU] Yoshi's Woolly World - "Yoshi and Cookies" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TT4mu-XWIlo)

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 27, 2020, 05:23:47 PM- you got it. I wish Finale wouldn't do that under swing feel by default...
- you're right, it doesn't. Took those notes out

Quote from: NineLives on January 27, 2020, 04:05:12 PMFair enough. I think I'll call dibs on "Sweet Sweet Canyon" from Mario Kart 8 instead before someone else does.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 27, 2020, 03:49:21 PMFish is indeed a food :P

Quote from: Rubikium on January 28, 2020, 10:00:40 AM[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "World 3: Treat Land" FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1HWUCZOjzYlfWIIOog0T-CuR2pzvyG7Hi) Original (http://youtu.be/92T-fDW9xAw/)

Quote from: Yug_Guy on January 26, 2020, 02:42:30 PMPokémon Stadium [N64]

"Sushi-Go-Round"

MUS (https://tinyurl.com/su2l7nv)

MUSX (https://tinyurl.com/s489fmo)

MIDI (https://tinyurl.com/r35jrn6)

PDF (https://tinyurl.com/uqgqcez)

Original (https://tinyurl.com/u7anqzs)

Quote from: Static on January 26, 2020, 08:03:04 PM

• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Choco Island" (Replacement) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1maycX3J0L0ohxDNVlWrD3tn5sLCBKIun)

Quote from: Static on January 26, 2020, 08:03:04 PM

• [SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Let's Go Down the Wine River" (Replacement) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6i3fGvW_38VaW9xOGdSRkRCQlE)

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 27, 2020, 09:40:15 PM1. [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Dreaming of Food"

A pretty straight-forward tune; only had to make a small rhythm sacrifice in the LH. The last chord is a little more dissonant than I remember.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PM- There should be something signaling the introduction of the melody in beat 3 of measure 4. One thing I'd suggest is using a p dynamic at the beginning and having the rest of the song be mp/mf from there.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PM- Measures 8 and 16 beat 3 should have an A# in the right hand, layer 2.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PM- Measure 21+ would be better as arpeggios of single notes in the left hand instead of trying to combine multiple layers and having some releating notes

Quote from: Latios212 on January 27, 2020, 03:49:21 PMFish is indeed a food :P

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PMI think I'm hearing a G instead of a C in the last chord. Other than that, looks great.

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 27, 2020, 05:10:47 PMYea sure, it's the "Victory" theme: Final Fantasy Legend, The (GB) Music - Victory Theme 01 (https://youtu.be/aZzzkc--UjY)

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PMReally great work. Just a few small things from me:
- This could look definitely a little nicer if you reduced the space between LH/RH to add more space between systems, particularly on page 2
- The "tap pen/pencil" marking might make a bit more sense at m. 38 where there are actually notes on the bottom staff. Maybe...
- Maybe a mf dynamic for the percussion? (i.e. not staying at f for the rest of the song)

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PMLooks awesome. I'd just suggest adjusting the slurs in m. 20 and 28 a bit since they look a bit awkward sloping down from the notehead to the note stem even though the notes are ascending.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PM- Beats 1.5 and 3.5 in the original sound just like the other notes to me, not sure why you have them notated like that?

Quote from: Yug_Guy on January 30, 2020, 08:29:18 PMCause it kinda sounds to me like there's an echo note played on those beats.

Quote from: Libera on January 30, 2020, 12:19:32 PMHungry March: [Musx] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/fwfn743f8ah22vm/Hungry%20March.musx?dl=1) [Pdf] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/l2431c5hidvd5is/Hungry%20March.pdf?dl=1) [Midi] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/z8dqlup3f2o929g/Hungry%20March.mid?dl=1) [Mus] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/b20hn67st19i1vc/Hungry%20March.mus?dl=1)
'Agh! Won goph in mah mouph! Blech! Ptooey!': [Musx] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/zhwlbht9y1h1haa/Agh%21%20Won%20goph%20in%20mah%20mouph%21%20Blech%21%20Ptooey%21.musx?dl=1) [Pdf] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ca089prvzxqwgjv/Agh%21%20Won%20goph%20in%20mah%20mouph%21%20Blech%21%20Ptooey%21.pdf?dl=1) [Midi] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/bub3e3jkrhoa378/Agh%21%20Won%20goph%20in%20mah%20mouph%21%20Blech%21%20Ptooey%21.mid?dl=1) [Mus] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/yf52sku0u1zip99/Agh%21%20Won%20goph%20in%20mah%20mouph%21%20Blech%21%20Ptooey%21.mus?dl=1)

Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on January 31, 2020, 09:02:20 PM[MUL] Monster Hunter

Quote from: Static on February 01, 2020, 12:54:12 PMHere's another sheet: Pac-Man - Start Music (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ejE9G4oeMIIDZ5SYKdtHAGhQjUbEgh3W)
(Title from here (https://vgmdb.net/album/15212))

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PMI think I'm hearing a G instead of a C in the last chord. Other than that, looks great.

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 29, 2020, 11:28:12 PMI went back and listened, and it turns out there is indeed a G4 in that last chord. Deleted the C and put a G in between that E-flat - B-flat perfect fifth. Updated the file, too.

Quote from: Static on January 30, 2020, 08:03:37 PMChoco Island
- Done
- I think I'd like to keep them where they are since that's when the percussion section starts. The directions may also be harder to follow if they're on different systems.
- Done (made the final part forte for some extra contrast also).

Let's Go Down the Wine River
That may look weird, I agree, but having the slurs go upward on the 2nd layer also looks weird. I made it so every slur goes from stem to stem and ends right on top of each staccato mark, so everything is consistent between layers.

Thanks for the feedback!

Quote from: Latios212 on January 28, 2020, 03:54:33 PM- Beats 1.5 and 3.5 in the original sound just like the other notes to me, not sure why you have them notated like that?

Quote from: Yug_Guy on January 30, 2020, 08:29:18 PMCause it kinda sounds to me like there's an echo note played on those beats.

Quote from: McDucky on January 31, 2020, 12:31:38 PMJust sounds like a regular ol' note to me too.

Quote from: LeviR.star on January 26, 2020, 04:31:45 PM- [GB] The Final Fantasy Legend - "Eat the Meat"

Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on January 31, 2020, 09:02:20 PM[MUL] Monster Hunter

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Quote from: McDucky on February 01, 2020, 04:13:11 AMI actually started on this one, but thankfully I saw this before I could dedicate a significant amount of time to it  ;D
Looks (and sounds) good, but are you sure about the double sharp on measure 2 beat 2?

Quote from: Latios212 on February 01, 2020, 02:12:05 PMYeah, I think this would be better as a G natural. A bit odd because of the G# grace notes but I think it's clearer what exactly is happening with Gn.
Also, in m. 3 you have an A#-Bb and Fx-Gn grace notes. I assume you want the chromatic neighboring tones (A and F#) instead of the same note spelled differently.

Quote from: McDucky on February 01, 2020, 04:13:11 AMLooks (and sounds) good, but are you sure about the double sharp on measure 2 beat 2?

Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on January 31, 2020, 09:02:20 PM[MUL] Monster Hunter

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Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on February 01, 2020, 04:32:16 PMI agree with both of you and fixed the neighboring tones :D

Quote from: Latios212 on February 01, 2020, 02:12:05 PMHungry March - Libera
- Measure 1 beat 3 (RH) needs to be adjusted visually a bit
- I'm not 100% sure, but I've heard the F-G on beats 3.5-4 of m. 6 as part of the melody (top layer).
- I think the chords in the last couple measures need to be inverted up once (similar to the voicing at the beginning)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 01, 2020, 02:12:05 PMSushi-Go-Round - Yug Guy
Yeah, I agree with McDucky... still hearing just normal melody notes.

Quote from: Yug_Guy on January 26, 2020, 02:42:30 PMPokémon Stadium [N64]

"Sushi-Go-Round"

MUS (https://tinyurl.com/su2l7nv)

MUSX (https://tinyurl.com/s489fmo)

MIDI (https://tinyurl.com/r35jrn6)

PDF (https://tinyurl.com/uqgqcez)

Original (https://tinyurl.com/u7anqzs)

Quote from: Yug_Guy on February 01, 2020, 09:11:43 PMI suppose that puts me in the minority then. Updated with quarter notes.

Quote from: Libera on February 01, 2020, 06:18:45 PM-Yep, should be fixed now thanks to your assistance.
-Hmm.  This was also how I originally heard it, but I'm reasonably confident that it isn't actually.  The C is much louder than the preceding F and G and the timbre of the E sounds really similar to the F and G to me.  It also makes that little F G E F into a mini The Edge of Dawn quotation, which seems about right for this OST.
-Sure, done.

Thanks for checking!

Quote from: Latios212 on February 01, 2020, 09:14:09 PMI think you misunderstood - I'm saying they're regular eighth notes.

Quote from: LeviR.star on February 01, 2020, 12:59:41 PMI think that you really ought to merge this with the Intermission theme. The songs are short enough for them to fit onto one page.

Also, I'm hearing the "Game Start" theme (as it should be called,) as C major. This applies to most incarnations of the theme, including the original arcade version and early ports on the NES and Game Boy.

Quote from: Static on February 01, 2020, 11:42:07 PM- Keys for both have been tuned down to be in tune with their console renditions (C and F, respectively)

Quote from: McDucky on January 27, 2020, 12:33:59 PMHere's a small sheet I put together
Dragon Quest VIII - Alchemy Pot (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/7w2ho9msa8gkw4d/AABPXMZJm9tXnY7oQAl5QJola) [Youtube (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrLwmkSs5R4)]

Quote from: Yug_Guy on February 01, 2020, 09:25:19 PM...oh.

Quote from: Code_Name_Geek on February 01, 2020, 10:05:59 PMPersona 5 - Big Bang Burger March

(One thing to note about this one is that there should possibly be a courtesy key signature at the repeat since it goes back to the former key, but I wasn't sure how to format that - does it go in front of the repeat? After?)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 02, 2020, 08:47:49 AMFor the courtesy key signature - one thing you can do is insert a measure with the new keysig, hide the extra barline, insert a hidden repeat marking to skip over it, and squish it using the Measure tool so that it takes no horizontal space. That said, I don't think it's too necessary here because the forward repeat bar is at the beginning of a system (i.e. the performer can see that the keysig is clear there). But if you want that clarity, go right ahead!

Other stuff about this one:
- The dynamic markings (mp/mf) are all a bit too much to the right. Speaking of dynamics, I feel like given the march style of this piece you could use f instead of mf. Up to you, though.
- I'm not hearing the upper notes in the RH for the dyads in m. 6/8/14/16.

Quote from: Code_Name_Geek on February 02, 2020, 01:11:38 PM- I think the courtesy key signature is especially helpful here since it's going back to C Major, which is less of a visual contrast than other key signatures might be. Thanks for the instructions on how to do it!
- You have a point with the dynamics, and usually I would agree with that. In the context that the track appears in-game (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QAZ8JfTpxSk), however, it's meant to have that sound of coming through tinny speakers in a fast food restaurant. That's why I thought a softer dynamic was more appropriate in this case.
- Notes are fixed.

Thanks for taking a look!

Quote from: Latios212 on February 02, 2020, 07:39:49 AMCooking Mama

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Title Screen

[MUS] (http://www.dropbox.com/s/54jyqgdhlq61424/284%20-%20Title%20Screen%20%28Cooking%20Mama%29.mus?dl=1) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/3b8s6mH) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2GJUEVB) [Original] (http://bit.ly/31fRsud)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 02, 2020, 08:47:49 AM- The tied eighths everywhere except for the first pair in m. 8 should be quarter notes instead.
- Move a couple of measures up so the third system isn't stretched and the last isn't squished. Each system could have 3 or 4 measures.

Quote from: McDucky on February 02, 2020, 02:36:29 PMDon't know why I left it like that, but I've fixed it up now.
I also removed the time signature changes in the middle because I felt it wasn't really necessary.

I have considered notating it in Db Major (based on the final chord), C Major, or Gb Major, but I think the split double signatures makes the most sense and looks the cleanest.

Quote from: Latios212 on February 02, 2020, 02:40:32 PMLast couple of things with this one - the tie over the key signature change in m. 7-8 is visibly broken. Also, the middle quarter in m. 10 should be two tied eighths.

Quote[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Cooking With Zess T." (https://youtu.be/TfVTGxhzGDE)

Quote from: Static on January 26, 2020, 08:03:04 PM[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Vs. Squashini" (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1UzttS1vH6xEYGJFMNWmH9obAwU-7ToMW)

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 06, 2020, 12:26:39 AMHere's my submission:

Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky: "Apple Woods"
[MUS] (https://www.dropbox.com/preview/Finale%20Files/Apple%20Woods/Apple%20Woods.mus?dl=0) [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/preview/Finale%20Files/Apple%20Woods/Apple%20Woods.mid?dl=0) [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/preview/Finale%20Files/Apple%20Woods/Apple%20Woods.pdf?rdl=0)

Quote from: LeviR.star on February 02, 2020, 07:40:12 AMYou could put a repeat sign at the end of Coffee Break, since it loops back to the start at least once at every Pac-Man intermission.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 04, 2020, 08:10:34 PMThis sounds really good but I have to question the right hand in m7-8... Also, I think that the LH dyads might actually all be triads in m17-24—for example, I'm hearing F#'s and G's under the dyads in m17-18 (i.e. F#-B-D#, G-C-E, and G-B-E triads).

Quote from: Zeila on February 07, 2020, 03:44:48 PM[MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - Link's Memories: "Silent Princess"

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MID (https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt4plmh9v1v3ze9/Link%27s%20Memories%20-%20Silent%20Princess.mid?dl=1) | MUS (https://www.dropbox.com/s/dzhut6bs2jczlvb/Link%27s%20Memories%20-%20Silent%20Princess.mus?dl=1) | MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/1h8unkkxe2zaduu/Link%27s%20Memories%20-%20Silent%20Princess.musx?dl=1) | PDF (https://www.dropbox.com/s/pjv02xri4gbuc12/Link%27s%20Memories%20-%20Silent%20Princess.pdf?dl=1) | Original (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCe7noVKujg)

Quote from: LeviR.star on February 07, 2020, 03:52:03 PMPardon me for asking; Zelda may not be my area of expertise, but exacly what makes this sheet fitting for a Food/Cooking update?

Quote from: Code_Name_Geek on February 08, 2020, 12:32:50 PMThis is the last arrangement from me for this project, and probably the most challenging of the three arranging-wise.

Quote from: Splatoon Inkling on February 07, 2020, 06:23:43 PMHere is what I worked on, Soda Jungle

https://www.dropbox.com/s/hmmjhc3uozyfc5v/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.musx?dl=0 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/hmmjhc3uozyfc5v/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.musx?dl=0) .MUSX

https://www.dropbox.com/s/7gva6zhsld8tg7y/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.mus?dl=0 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/7gva6zhsld8tg7y/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.mus?dl=0) .MUS

https://www.dropbox.com/s/h3yom11zaqknyng/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.mid?dl=0 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/h3yom11zaqknyng/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.mid?dl=0) .MIDI

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ya3ws3gi2n3jciv/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.pdf?dl=0 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ya3ws3gi2n3jciv/NSMBU%20Soda%20Jungle.pdf?dl=0) .PDF

https://youtu.be/6JigVt4w0vc (https://youtu.be/6JigVt4w0vc) Original

Quote from: McDucky on February 02, 2020, 02:36:29 PMDon't know why I left it like that, but I've fixed it up now.
I also removed the time signature changes in the middle because I felt it wasn't really necessary.

I have considered notating it in Db Major (based on the final chord), C Major, or Gb Major, but I think the split double signatures makes the most sense and looks the cleanest.

Quote from: Yug_Guy on February 05, 2020, 07:03:47 PMKirby Super Star [SNES]

"Peanut Plain" (Replacement)

MUS (https://goo.gl/Aw9uRJ)

MUSX (https://goo.gl/l83OSF)

MIDI (https://goo.gl/mo61Iz)

PDF (https://goo.gl/OZW8Ix)

Original (https://goo.gl/w68L1k)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 12:07:31 PMRhythm Heaven Fever

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Working Dough

[MUS] (http://bit.ly/2SbIElW) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/39a5Uqk) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2UsqE8H) [Original] (http://bit.ly/2vbMVwE)

Yoshi's Cookie

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Title Screen

[MUS] (http://bit.ly/2S9IonL) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/2H8Z20t) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2vc30md) [Original] (http://bit.ly/2H2YtVZ)

Kirby's Return to Dream Land

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Dangerous Dinner

[MUS] (http://bit.ly/31DHJOs) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/3bohbFp) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2UH3s6D) [Original] (http://bit.ly/3bohjVp)

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 06, 2020, 12:26:39 AMPokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky: "Apple Woods"

 [MUS] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/kw9rz2v0dfqypza/Apple%20Woods.mus?dl=1)  [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/t2wkwgrxl1a4z6g/Apple%20Woods.mid?dl=1)  [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/x3xthlas9ol54al/Apple%20Woods.pdf?dl=0)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 01:09:34 AM"Godot ~ The Fragrance of Dark Coffee" (replacement) - [NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Trials and Tribulations (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/uvqwbk19tv4bwhe/AABmsnILV0F6ivBjrrf-tmyqa?dl=0)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM

Godot ~ The Fragrance of Dark Coffee - mastersuperfan

Yay replacement!
- Page 1 footer and page 2 header are outside the margins (would suggest moving everything down on page 2 to spread it out evenly)
- You have an A# against a Bb in m. 9, not sure if it would be better to pick one... though I see the Bb>A and A#>B movement with the next measure so maybe it's fine
- I think m. 18 needs more harmony (hearing an A, maybe other stuff too). Also the top dot is funny there
- The major second in m. 29 is a bit more clashy than I think it should be (also a bit odd because the D just struck prior); how about lowering the D back down an octave? The ninth isn't too bad to stretch

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 01:35:36 PMFiles updated with Latios' feedback, along with some help with enharmonic spellings from Static.

Quote from: Rubikium on February 09, 2020, 12:16:19 PM[3DS] Kirby: Planet Robobot - "Time for Dessert!" (http://drive.google.com/open?id=1xwYhnUfJcMc8VPgZrdTFIee8dtz5m7Bm)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- m. 16 is missing the pickup to m. 17.

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- Maybe staccatos would be nice on the bass notes in beat 4 of m. 23 to best 3 of m. 24?

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- I think some of those chords at the end would be better off using flats (the D#/C#/G# chords in particular). Up to you though.

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 06, 2020, 12:26:39 AMPokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky: "Apple Woods"

 [MUS] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/kw9rz2v0dfqypza/Apple%20Woods.mus?dl=1)  [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/t2wkwgrxl1a4z6g/Apple%20Woods.mid?dl=1)  [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/x3xthlas9ol54al/Apple%20Woods.pdf?dl=0)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 04:57:55 PM- m45-46 RH sounds like you could make each beat two 8th notes instead of one quarter note, with the second 8th note of each beat having only the upper two notes from the previous 8th note.

Quote from: Code_Name_Geek on February 08, 2020, 10:35:38 PMThanks for taking a look!

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 02:53:46 PM

Crash! Gourmet Race - LeviR.star

Other than the above, I think for m. 3 it'd be better to just have the chords strike twice rapidly in succession each time, if playability was the concern here. I think the 16th notes after the chord sound a little odd and with this speed is not unreasonable to just play the chord twice as fast as possible.

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Quote from: Static on February 09, 2020, 07:10:31 PMI'd actually prefer 8vb lines here over text prompts. It's just easier to follow and shows the reader exactly what to do.

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 09, 2020, 07:36:07 PMDone.

Quote from: Libera on February 09, 2020, 03:06:46 PM

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- m. 16 is missing the pickup to m. 17.

Yeah I think that got deleted somehow, not entirely sure.  Thanks for spotting it.

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- Maybe staccatos would be nice on the bass notes in beat 4 of m. 23 to best 3 of m. 24?

They don't feel staccato in the sense that the others are to me... but I put tenuto staccatos on them as a compromise for you.

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM- I think some of those chords at the end would be better off using flats (the D#/C#/G# chords in particular). Up to you though.

If you swap some of the more annoying ones to flats then you end up swapping between sharps and flats on different chords, and then the short melody lines don't make much sense and it's just a bit ugly.  I think it's better as is.

Thanks for having a look; file updated.

Quote from: LeviR.star on February 09, 2020, 07:20:35 PMAddressed everything here, and updated the file in my folder.

Quote from: Libera on February 09, 2020, 03:39:51 PMLatios212

Gourmet Race
-Sometimes the bass contour doesn't quite line up with the original, like bar 26 for example where the bass goes down to the G twice, rather than up and then down.  I assume it's to avoid the consecutive Gs but worth mentioning anyway.
-I think that, once again, there are places that slurs could go a long way to help with clarity in the articulation, particularly in bars 49-50.

Teatime Joy
-The harp part just goes MIA in bars 2-3 for some reason?  Maybe you didn't hear it because it's kind of quiet?
-A missing D on the second beat of bar 12?  Although I don't hear it in bar 29 so it may just be my ears playing tricks on me.
-There's a Bn and Cn on beats 1 and 2 of bar 13 in the pizz strings part.  Same for bar 30.
-Harp part disappears again in bars 19 and 20.  And doesn't feature in 38 either.
-You lose the sus4 sound on beat 2 of bar 34 by omitting the lower Cn.  Maybe try putting one just below the melody Dn?  You did it before elsewhere so might work here too.

Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on February 09, 2020, 08:49:01 PM[MUL] Monster Hunter Generations

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Proudly Serving Fondue, Bon Appétit ~ Ingredient Selection!		(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FcZKANx&hash=667b5b70f3bcc4250dec6795fb0e9f6e1f2c4d28) (https://youtu.be/zbvdJM3oMY4)		(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FiETSb2&hash=db6ffad49fb0a63e0293cc0c70daf9405f4f9318) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/fmadyxhzqw63mno/Proudly%20Serving%20Fondue%2C%20Bon%20App%C3%A9tit%20~%20Ingredient%20Selection%21.pdf?dl=1)	(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FNzw6x1&hash=3b5aa27a52bf0dc60cb5d87fd678b18f260099b4) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/kmwwmkzn8urqrlx/Proudly%20Serving%20Fondue%2C%20Bon%20App%C3%A9tit%20~%20Ingredient%20Selection%21.mus?dl=1)	(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FWJ76OR&hash=24449915ccff4ce908a9feb34d2c6ba3f7f0856d) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/wlkb4088g6orc2q/Proudly%20Serving%20Fondue%2C%20Bon%20App%C3%A9tit%20~%20Ingredient%20Selection%21.mid?dl=1)	[musx] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/j0ze887t3v1bo6l/Proudly%20Serving%20Fondue%2C%20Bon%20App%C3%A9tit%20~%20Ingredient%20Selection%21.musx?dl=1)

Quote from: LeviR.star on February 10, 2020, 02:40:34 PMSike! Added an old arrangement, [GB] Balloon Kid - "Shrimp Boss", to my folder as my official last sheet for this project. Can't believe I forgot about it...

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Quote from: Libera on January 26, 2020, 01:46:34 PMWe'll need to receive submissions no later than (February 9th) so that we have enough time to check the sheets!

Quote from: Libera on February 10, 2020, 03:21:37 PMSorry, but there was a deadline.  Maybe if everything else gets done in enough time we can have a look at it, but absolutely no promises.

Quote from: Rubikium on February 06, 2020, 11:24:13 AM[GBA] Kirby & The Amazing Mirror - "Olive Ocean" (http://drive.google.com/open?id=1ctOZE6TX8NubKj90RmaNxCiQnHyD9uZ7)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 12:07:31 PMKirby's Return to Dream Land

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Dangerous Dinner

[MUS] (http://bit.ly/31DHJOs) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/3bohbFp) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2UH3s6D) [Original] (http://bit.ly/3bohjVp)

Quote from: Libera on February 09, 2020, 03:39:51 PMTeatime Joy
-The harp part just goes MIA in bars 2-3 for some reason?  Maybe you didn't hear it because it's kind of quiet?
-A missing D on the second beat of bar 12?  Although I don't hear it in bar 29 so it may just be my ears playing tricks on me.
-There's a Bn and Cn on beats 1 and 2 of bar 13 in the pizz strings part.  Same for bar 30.
-Harp part disappears again in bars 19 and 20.  And doesn't feature in 38 either.
-You lose the sus4 sound on beat 2 of bar 34 by omitting the lower Cn.  Maybe try putting one just below the melody Dn?  You did it before elsewhere so might work here too.

Quote from: Libera on February 09, 2020, 03:39:51 PMGourmet Race
-Sometimes the bass contour doesn't quite line up with the original, like bar 26 for example where the bass goes down to the G twice, rather than up and then down.  I assume it's to avoid the consecutive Gs but worth mentioning anyway.
-I think that, once again, there are places that slurs could go a long way to help with clarity in the articulation, particularly in bars 49-50.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 01:52:06 AM- I would specify "L.H." in the "play one octave lower than written" note.
- The consecutive 16ths in the LH in m1-3 are really hard to play with the thumb. I would suggest changing those into single 8th notes since it shouldn't sound that different anyway.
- I think a lot of the eighth notes in the melody (m5-19) could use staccatos.
- I'm also hearing an F and an A (in addition to the D, which is the highest note) on beat 3 of m30 RH. (also, a D on the final beat)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 01:52:06 AM- m3-4 in the RH looks pretty difficult to play, and while I imagine the notes are there, that's not really the line I hear most on a first listen to the original. Is there an easier/more prominent melody to include there instead?

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 09, 2020, 01:52:06 AM- m5, m8, m11, m13, and m16 all have a 16th-note triplet instead of two 16th notes on beat 1.5. This is also true of m17 and m19, but it's much harder to play a repeated dyad that fast (with a single note you can use different fingers in rapid succession), so I would only make the change in the aforementioned measures.

QuoteKirby Super Star [SNES]

"Peanut Plain" (Replacement)

MUS (https://goo.gl/Aw9uRJ)

MUSX (https://goo.gl/l83OSF)

MIDI (https://goo.gl/mo61Iz)

PDF (https://goo.gl/OZW8Ix)

Original (https://goo.gl/w68L1k)

Quote from: Static on February 08, 2020, 09:14:56 PM- m20: That grace note slur might look better flipped upwards instead.

Quote from: Static on February 08, 2020, 09:14:56 PM- m25, 27 RH: Any reason you went with 32nds instead of grace notes? Either is fine, I'm just wondering. The B# in m27 would probably be better written as a C in this case. The main reason is to match m25 but there's another harmonic line of reasoning I was thinking about. It's kind of weird bc there are so few notes here, but if you think of the dyads in the LH as being part of parallel dominant 7th chords, then the chord here is a G7, and B# isn't a part of that chord/scale (even if the key is something different, I think its better to pick accidentals based on the current chord or scale, but it depends) Sorry, this is kind of a lot to say for one tiny little thing, so if you have any questions let me know.

Quote from: NineLives on February 10, 2020, 04:37:07 PMHere's a little update on my sheet. I've got most of Static's fixes taken care of. All that's left are the chords and the other stuff for measures 45-52. Here's the current file: "Sweet Sweet Canyon" MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ondhtcwtdcb2llz/Mario%20Kart%208%20-%20Sweet%20Sweet%20Canyon.musx?dl=0)

Quote from: Zeila on February 10, 2020, 07:51:15 PMI like it the way it is now, although I adjusted the curve a bit
No, this makes sense. Thanks for your input! About the grace notes, I wanted it to be more precise but then there wouldn't be much difference between those and 32nd notes anyways if at all. Grace notes are easier to read too (and it's more consistent with the rest of the arrangement), so I changed it

Link's Memories: "Silent Princess" (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/cyfampw59vf1xyt/AABefOwcsFbNvHY8nsdqzMLoa?dl=0)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 12:07:31 PMKirby's Return to Dream Land

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Dangerous Dinner

[MUS] (http://bit.ly/31DHJOs) [MIDI] (http://bit.ly/3bohbFp) [PDF] (http://bit.ly/2UH3s6D) [Original] (http://bit.ly/3bohjVp)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 10, 2020, 05:16:32 PM- This is a matter of personal arranging preference, but the intro to the original is pretty driving and the bassline by itself is a little bare—I would personally consider writing it like this (not actually playing it all with the left hand like I wrote it, but give the octaves to the LH and the higher notes to the RH), although of course it's up to you:

Spoiler

(https://i.imgur.com/bqnQ7n1.png)

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- Sounds like there are some harmonies you could add to the RH melody on m16 beat 2.5, m20 beat 2.5, and m24 beat 1.5 and 2.5 (last two notes).
- m11 RH beat 4.5 (last note), I'm not hearing a chord—only the F.
- For m12 RH, I think you could raise those two chords by an octave so that the contour from m11 to m12 goes upwards, and also so that it goes higher than m8 since it's building up to the next section.
- I'm hearing the Bb in m19 RH beat 4 as an octave lower than you've written it.

Quote from: Static on February 10, 2020, 08:31:13 PMJust make the 2 8th rests in m25 RH a quarter rest, and the 3 8th rests in m27 RH a dotted quarter rest, and this one's all set. Everything else looks great!

Quote from: Static on February 08, 2020, 09:14:56 PM- The "Dim.Dream" part of the title shouldn't have a space between "Dim." and "Dream".
- m55 RH: Courtesy natural for the An perhaps?
- m60-61: Ending numbers are a bit too close to the notes for my liking.
- m66: mf is touching barline.
- Make sure you specify that you want the LH 8vb to end after m97.
- https
- Developer should be "ZUN Soft", along with publisher Amusement Makers (this applies to all the PC-98 Touhou games btw).

Sweet Sweet Canyon (Mario Kart - NineLives

Have you considered using cut time with half note = 124 instead? 248 is really fast and, barring the fact that I only perceive "the beat" twice per measure, lots of measures can't even go up to 248 BPM. I'm thinking cut time might be more reasonable here.

I'm also a little concerned with playability in some parts, especially where you have fast consecutive octaves and/or jumps. One notable case is m32 and m36, which I give alternatives to below, but other than that, my worry is in places with consecutive eighth-note octaves like m22, m24, m25, etc. In particular, going from an "and" to a beat (which requires a lot of speed given the swing) could be very hard. In the RH, on the second note of m22, last note of m22, second note of m24, last note of m24, second note of m25, etc. etc. I would consider omitting the lower note entirely (since you don't need octaves on every note, especially when it's not on the beat and surrounded by other octaves), or simply putting parentheses around the lower note to indicate that they're optional.

I'm hearing some differences in the bassline compared to what Static said:
- I'm not hearing the high G in m8 LH beat 2 or the B at the end of m8 LH; beat 2 just sounds like an eighth rest and I would make beat 4 a quarter note.
- Similarly, beat 4 of m12 LH also sounds like just a quarter note to me.
- Instead of the G and D at the end of m24 LH, I hear a rest for beat 3 and a quarter note G for beat 4.
- For m26, I hear beat 1 LH (G) an octave higher.
- For m27, I think it would be better just to remove the grace note and raise the G back up an octave. What happens here, and also multiple times in m26, is that the bass starts on the high note and then slides down. When I listen to it at full speed, however, I mainly hear just the high note, which also follows the ascending line of the bass better, so I would just use that note. (Since this happens multiple times in m26 too, I think it would be impractical to notate all instances with consecutive octave-jump grace notes.)
- m36 LH beat 3 sounds like it's tied to the first quarter note of beat 4.
- I hear the G on m44 beat 1 an octave up. (The downward slide happens again here, but I personally think just the high note is best, especially since that's what the F# in m43 leads to.)

Other note things:
- There are some harmonies you could add to the RH in m3-4 like so:
(https://i.imgur.com/6OThYXi.png)
- The bottom note of the dyad on beat 2 of m11 RH should be an A, not a G.
- Also in m11 RH, I would strongly suggest putting the accordion(?) part on top of beats 3 (note = C) and 4 (note = D).
- You might consider putting a grace note on the first note of m14 RH.
- Not sure about the tenuto in m17... tenutos are generally pretty ambiguous and it's the only one you use in the whole sheet so it's a bit out of place. Perhaps a two-note slur instead?
- For the sake of playability, I would strongly suggest removing the first note (G) in Layer 2 of m19 so that they don't have to make that massive jump in 0.08 seconds (1/3rd of a beat at 248 BPM). I don't think it adds that much since the violin line is harder to hear under the melody, especially when it first enters.
- m20 Layer 1 should look like this:
(https://i.imgur.com/n5sDq6M.png)
- I think it would be nice to have the last melody note in m28 RH, but obviously the rolled chord gets in the way. This is completely your choice, but if you want to be a bit more liberal with your arrangement, you could have the last melody note on beat 2.5 there and then delay the rolled chord until beat 4.
- m29 melody should be D-Db-C-Cb, not D-C-Cb-B. Also, there's a harmony of Bb-Bbb-(nothing on the third note)-Ab under the top voice. I would strongly suggest including this and omitting the octaves on the second and third triplet notes because those consecutive octaves are very hard to play that fast. Here's a picture of the revision I'm suggesting:
(https://i.imgur.com/OYOENza.png)
- Similarly, I would do something like this for m36 (although there seem to be fewer harmonies here);
(https://i.imgur.com/btvX6Tk.png)
- I would also suggest overlapping the same note in Layer 1 and Layer 2 on m43 RH beat 3 to make it clear to the pianist what the Layer 2 line is actually doing, even if it doesn't necessarily change the way it's played:
(https://i.imgur.com/5flwBlC.png)
- I actually wonder if the half note on m48 RH beat 1 would be clearer if it weren't offset, even if that causes it to clash with Layer 1 a bit more. Not sure though.

There are also lots of places where courtesy accidentals would be really nice, including but not limited to:
- Beat 2 (E natural) of m7, m11, m19, m59 LH.
- Beat 3 (G natural) of m35 LH.
- Beat 4 (A natural) of m55 LH.

Formatting things:
- Move the 8va across m25-28 up so it's not clashing with the notes in m25.
- Also move the 8va up and have it start further to the left in m44, so it's completely over the chord.
- Could you move m17-20 down so that the slur isn't getting really close to the system above? Either that or delete the slur entirely since I'm not sure it adds a ton.
- Also move the tempo marking a little higher.
- Maybe move the 8va marking in m49-52 up by like, a smidge.
- Finally, your arpeggio signs go a little high above the top note of the chord in m4 and m44; I'd shorten the top a little bit.

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Quote from: Maelstrom on February 12, 2020, 06:37:02 PMEgg Engines - MSF
Big fan of this arrangement, but I have a few issues that mostly stem from spacing. m16 has the 16th note getting nearly the same space as the surrounding 8th notes, which isn't great. I see that you did it to preserve the hypermeter, but it still rubs me the wrong way. Keep it if you like. The other issue is one that I'm a bit more adamant about. The system of m25 is just a mess. The notes need room to breathe and sticking to the hypermeter won't let that happen. Pulling the 4th measure down to the next system is one option that works reasonably well. The other option is to pull down m16 and respace the  measures from there, so you end up with 4 systems on page 2. Up to you whatever you choose, but I don't think that leaving that system alone is a good idea.

Quote from: Maelstrom on February 12, 2020, 07:18:37 PMGodot ~ The Dark Fragrance of Coffee - MSF
I'm not picking on your sheets, you just arranged songs I know well.

I can see why you left out some of the 2nd layer notes for payability in  parts, but I think adding them on the last meat of m17 would enhance it. Unless, of course, the tone you're going for is never playing more than the the one note per measure.

I am physically unable to find any other issues. Good job.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 12, 2020, 08:57:54 PMHave you considered using cut time with half note = 124 instead? 248 is really fast and, barring the fact that I only perceive "the beat" twice per measure, lots of measures can't even go up to 248 BPM. I'm thinking cut time might be more reasonable here.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 12, 2020, 08:57:54 PM"Godot ~ The Fragrance of Dark Coffee" (replacement) - [NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Trials and Tribulations (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/uvqwbk19tv4bwhe/AABmsnILV0F6ivBjrrf-tmyqa?dl=0)
"Egg Engines" - [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/hh3auanlwr3hqdv/AAAF135Qmn-gDEfCMxps2cf9a?dl=0)

Quote from: NineLives on February 13, 2020, 07:24:55 AMI did try both of those before, but it messed up with the swing in the playback, so I changed it to 4/4 and 248. However, I just figured out how to get the tempo you wanted to work. Is there a way I can make the key signature cut time but still have the original 4/4 in playback? Other than that, I think I got all else done. "Sweet Sweet Canyon" MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ondhtcwtdcb2llz/Mario%20Kart%208%20-%20Sweet%20Sweet%20Canyon.musx?dl=0)

Quote from: NineLives on February 13, 2020, 07:24:55 AMI did try both of those before, but it messed up with the swing in the playback, so I changed it to 4/4 and 248. However, I just figured out how to get the tempo you wanted to work. Is there a way I can make the key signature cut time but still have the original 4/4 in playback? Other than that, I think I got all else done. "Sweet Sweet Canyon" MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ondhtcwtdcb2llz/Mario%20Kart%208%20-%20Sweet%20Sweet%20Canyon.musx?dl=0)

Quote from: Zeila on February 10, 2020, 09:12:35 PMAlrighty, thanks!

Posting the link again for convenience:
Link's Memories: "Silent Princess" (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/cyfampw59vf1xyt/AABefOwcsFbNvHY8nsdqzMLoa?dl=0)

Quote from: Maelstrom on February 12, 2020, 07:32:25 PMThat is a horrible use of title punctuation.
I don't see how a courtesy accidental would be of any use in m55 ......
Everything else was fixed.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 11, 2020, 07:49:47 PMSpinach Rag (Final Fantasy VI) - Static
Cool track, very accurate sheet, notes seem good. Just a few things:
- The slur is touching the flat in m28.
- I would put a courtesy natural on the E in m8 and m16 RH.
- You use A# in m25 and Bb in m49. Not sure if there's an actual difference in chord progression here (if there is, keep it as is) or if it might be better to make it consistent between the two. Regardless, I would also suggest a courtesy natural on the A in m26 LH.
EDIT: Also the BPM should be 99 instead of 100 lol. I know some people are into rounding tempos to metronome numbers but I personally like to put the exact number since they can just round it to the closest one if their metronome doesn't have it. Up to you.

Quote from: Static on February 13, 2020, 01:50:48 PMLooks good. I went through all of msf's suggestions they check out so yeah. I would add a whole note C# to m50 to bring out the A major harmony there (right now it's ambiguous). 4/4 with a fast tempo is typical in many big band swing charts, but cut time is fine too, just follow msf's directions to make that happen. Once that's done I can approve...

Quote from: NineLives on February 13, 2020, 03:45:31 PMWell, I got the first thing, but PrintMusic doesn't seem to have the extra option to change the appearance of the 4/4 while keeping its impression. I'd like help with that little change. The file/link above has been updated to have the C#.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 13, 2020, 08:05:16 PM- The B on the bottom of beat 1.5 in m10 RH—I get that it's there in the original, but I'm not sure how well it translates to piano. You may or may not consider removing it if you like.
- yikes I didn't realize raising the 8va would make it so high everywhere from m45-end. I take back what I said before... it looks better lower. (Though—are you able to adjust the height of 8va in individual systems? It seems like the whole 8va has been raised uniformly.)
- A courtesy natural on the A on m15 RH beat 4 would be nice since the LH is playing Ab.

Quote from: NineLives on February 14, 2020, 06:25:00 AMYes, you can move the individual 8vas. Well, here it is: "Sweet Sweet Canyon" MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ondhtcwtdcb2llz/Mario%20Kart%208%20-%20Sweet%20Sweet%20Canyon.musx?dl=0)

Quote from: Latios212 on February 14, 2020, 06:17:03 PM"Frozen Pizza and Eggs (Shane's Theme)" - Code_Name_aGeek
- Could we include the dyads in the left hand? It would be a pretty simple addition to what we currently have and would add a bit more color without making it more difficult. In measures 1-2 C#s beneath the F#s, in m. 3-4 B's beneath the E's, in m. 5-6 A's beneath the C#'s, etc.
- Some of your RH notes are flipped in m. 9/17.

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 14, 2020, 11:07:15 PMAlso, am I crazy or should the whole bassline be an octave lower...?

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 14, 2020, 05:33:24 PMOther than that, the only comment I have to make is regarding the LH in the last measure. From what I can tell, the original only has the bottom note (low G). If you want to be transcriptionally very accurate to the original, you could just change it to that. However, if this is an intentional stylistic choice, it works well and you're absolutely free to keep it as is. Just wanted to double-check with you on this.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:25:48 AM

Radish Ruins (Kirby & The Amazing Mirror) - LeviR.star

Good sheet, notes generally check out. A few comments from me...
- tempo should be 137 BPM instead of 138 lol (getting a strange sense of déjà vu)
- The tempo marking is kind of high up; it might look better if you brought it down just a smidge.
- I'm not sure about the spacing in this sheet. The systems are reaaally far apart on the first page and I think it would look better closer together. Try this distribution (MUSX file) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/5uccxc7khx48gex/Kirby%20%26%20The%20Amazing%20Mirror%20-%20Radish%20Ruins.musx?dl=0)—after the first two systems, I grouped the measures by threes, which puts the repeat bar right at the end of the first page. This has the added benefit of, well, not making them go back a page when they go through the repeat.
- I didn't fiddle with the spacing on the second page, but any two-bar phrases might be a bit too stretched compared to three-bar phrases. You might consider putting measures into three bars phrases, and then for the last remaining measure, just shorten the system so it's spaced comparably. If you don't like having a system that short, you can work out whatever other organization you think is good.
- In the LH, beat of m2, m4, m8, and m12 sound just like two eighths instead of an eighth-note triplet.
- In the RH of m7-10, I imagine you omitted the harmonies on the 16th notes for playability's sake, but I think you could probably add them to the first 16th note of every pair. I think it would only become unreasonably difficult if you made them play fast dyads on all three notes in a row.
- Purely stylistic choice: Personally, I would consider inverting the dyads in the RH in m15-22. In the original, the melody (the lower voice) obviously stands out more than the higher harmonies above it, but it gets obscured here in the sheet because the high notes become so much more prominent. I think this is a case where you could sacrifice a bit of transcriptional accuracy for the sake of sticking to the spirit of the original theme, but it's your call.

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:25:48 AM

Goal Game (Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards) - LeviR.star

- I would specify "both hands"—i.e. "Play both hands one octave higher than written"
- I would also capitalize the P in play... (though I guess you don't have to)
- Finally, I would move that note more to the right and a little up, to be closer to the staves. You might even consider placing it above the staves, to the right of the tempo marking. Somewhere where they'll see it most easily. It doesn't make a huge difference though so do with it what you will.

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:25:48 AM

Yogurt Yard Map (Kirby's Adventure) - LeviR.star

- m4 LH beat 3.5 (C) sounds like just a single 8th note to me.
- The same thing I said for Radish Ruins goes for the 16th note harmonies here in m4. In fact, since these are staccato notes (and the tempo is not as fast), I don't think it would be unrealistic to just put the harmonies on every 16th note, actually.

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:25:48 AM

Dreaming of Food (Kirby Super Star) - LeviR.star

- That is a lot of space between systems. I don't think you need to go to such lengths just to fill the page... too many empty space in between is more unsightly than empty space at the bottom IMO.
- Regarding grace notes... I've now taken on Libera's view that the slur should be oriented for the big note, not for the grace notes. Thus, you might consider manually flipping the slur in m8-9 so that it's on top. Still, this is a matter of preference, so you can make the change or not.
- You may or may not consider shortening the length of the last system since those two measures are pretty stretched out as they are.

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:25:48 AM

Crash! Gourmet Race (Kirby Super Star) - LeviR.star

- tempo should be 169 instead of 170 (lol I'm doing this a lot... it's really close though, it's like 169.35)
- yikes that is a lot of ledger lines but I can see why it's not convenient to use an 8va/15ma to get rid of them so it's fine
- Same thing about grace notes that I mentioned in Dreaming for Food, if you really want to take the effort to manually adjust all the slurs.
- That is still a lot of empty space between systems on page 2... and it's coming at the expense of adequate space between staves in m18-19. I would definitely cut the spacing down a notch. Also, is it just me, or is the vertical distance between the 3rd and 4th systems on page 1 a little greater than the distance between the 2nd and 3rd systems? It's bothering me a little...

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 14, 2020, 07:32:55 PMSpinach Rag (Final Fantasy VI) - Static
- m32 RH beat 2 should just be a quarter note, not two eighth notes.
- Have you considered notating the LH in m1-4 and m51-52 in treble clef? For that matter, you might consider putting the whole thing in treble clef—or if not all of it, then more of it, since there are many places throughout (esp on the first page) where the LH uses a lot of ledger lines. Also I think it would provide better visual information on how close the two hands are to each other at any given point.
- Completely subjective, but I'm not sure that the dynamics difference between m1-20 and m20 onwards is equal to two dynamic levels. IMO I think it's only a one-level difference, but it doesn't matter much either way.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 14, 2020, 07:32:55 PMLet's Go Down the Wine River (Super Mario RPG) - Static
- tempo is actually 127 BPM lol
- m8 LH beat 1 sounds like it should be a high E.
- m18 and m26 RH beat 4 Layer 1 should be an F, not a G.
- There you harmonies you could add to beats 2-4 in the RH of m20, m28, and m32. I'm hearing Eb's under all three notes in m32, and in m20/28, I'm hearing Eb's under beats 2-3 and an Eb and/or a C under beat 4.
- The RH harmonies also change with the eighth notes in m29 and m30. It might make sense to simplify or omit some of the harmonies in m30 for playability, but I don't see any reason not to include the ones on beat 4.5 of m29.
- Beats 2 and 4 in each measure in the LH all sound like at least triads to me. You might consider adding another note on top (e.g. add an Ab on top in m1, a G on top in m2, etc.) but it makes sense if you left them out if you thought the sound would be too muddy in a low register.
- For m8, does the crescendo mean to get louder for only that one measure and then go back to mezzo forte in m9? You have mezzo forte in both m1 and m9 so I just wanted to double check.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 12:12:24 PMNow the staccatos I manually positioned in m45-49 are in the wrong places. Either you can re-position the Layer 1 staccatos to be near the noteheads yourself, or you can just leave them for now and we'll handle them later.
- For the last measure, I meant that the low G was the only thing I was hearing, so I would either keep the entire chord including the G, or only keep the low G.
- Regarding what Radiak said:- I checked out the first four measures and Radiak is right (except for the 1st measure where it's the 3rd, not the 5th, that's missing):
(That said, if you like the full chords, you can keep them since either way sounds just fine.)
- Radiak is also right in that, in the original, the bassline is an octave lower (starting from m5). Your call whether or not you want to lower the LH accordingly or keep it as is.

Quote from: NineLives on February 15, 2020, 04:42:30 PMAll right. The first few measures have the chords suggested and the LH of the last measure has the same chord as the fourth measure, and I'll keep the bassline as is. "Sweet Sweet Canyon" MUSX (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ondhtcwtdcb2llz/Mario%20Kart%208%20-%20Sweet%20Sweet%20Canyon.musx?dl=0)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 05:05:10 PMOne last tiny question: Should there be staccatos on RH beat 1 of m6, m10, and m22, or were those omitted intentionally?

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 11, 2020, 07:49:47 PM- I was wondering why you omitted all the high orchestral hits (e.g. where you could double the melody an octave higher) in places like the last two notes of m24, last note in m28, etc. While I can understand if you want to preserve the low octave of the main melody in places like m36, m53-56, and m60, I think it would be nice to add them in other places. In particular, I don't see any reason not to have them on m52 beat 4 and and m64 beat 4, where you don't have anything else going on there anyway. (At the very least, if not adding the hits, I would suggest adding accents to these notes.)
- From what I can tell, it seems like you're generally using the bass clef whenever the melody goes down to F or lower. However, I think that m20 and m36 (which are very similar) should be in the same clef for consistency's sake. On second look, though, you kept m24 in treble clef—was that intentional, or is there a different rule/pattern you're going for?

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 11, 2020, 07:49:47 PM- I was wondering why you omitted all the high orchestral hits (e.g. where you could double the melody an octave higher) in places like the last two notes of m24, last note in m28, etc. While I can understand if you want to preserve the low octave of the main melody in places like m36, m53-56, and m60, I think it would be nice to add them in other places. In particular, I don't see any reason not to have them on m52 beat 4 and and m64 beat 4, where you don't have anything else going on there anyway. (At the very least, if not adding the hits, I would suggest adding accents to these notes.)
- From what I can tell, it seems like you're generally using the bass clef whenever the melody goes down to F or lower. However, I think that m20 and m36 (which are very similar) should be in the same clef for consistency's sake. On second look, though, you kept m24 in treble clef—was that intentional, or is there a different rule/pattern you're going for?

Quote from: Latios212 on February 16, 2020, 10:12:20 AM

Cooking - Code_Name_Geek

- I think the dyads in m. 8 are like this (similar for m. 16 but might need some adjusting because of the other layer included)
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/678647496464924704/unknown.png
- m. 11/15 should have Gb instead of Ab in the second layer (RH)
- Beat 2 of m. 20/28 has Ab on the bottom, not Bb

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Quote from: Code_Name_Geek on February 16, 2020, 01:18:13 PM- Fixed the notes m. 8/16. I think the violin in m. 16 goes Db-Ab-Db so the same thing should work there.
- Fixed all other notes too.
- Something I noticed myself - I checked the bassline in m. 20/28 again and I think it goes like this (before I just had an Ab on beat 3 and nothing on beat 4):

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(https://i.imgur.com/sG3ZUeD.png)
(This was before I fixed the melody oops)

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Updated files:
[MUS] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/feo0l9ksjagp53c/Wii_ToT_Cooking.mus?dl=0) [MUSX] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/zs5dyprwvcvyh5c/Wii_ToT_Cooking.musx?dl=0) [PDF] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/zs5dyprwvcvyh5c/Wii_ToT_Cooking.musx?dl=0) [MIDI] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/0t6gmumtcn532ad/Wii_ToT_Cooking.mid?dl=0)

Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM

Static - Vs. Squashini

- Done.
- Done.
- At one point I had a third voice there, but I removed it. I removed the G in m20 and changed the G to an E in m24.

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Static - Large Fry Cook-Off

- Oops, I hid the wrong one lol
- Oh yeah, those were for when I had Gbs instead of F#s in an earlier revision. I removed them now.
- No that's not just you. I moved them.

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Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM

Latios212 - Title Screen (Yoshi's Cookie)

- I'd probably move the C in layer 2 beat 2 RH up an octave in m10 and m14.

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Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM

Latios212 - Fun Castle

- m20 RH: That B-D dyad should be tied to the next quarter note. It's kind of tricky to tell because of the echo effect, but the only new note that should play on beat 2 (4th 8th note) should be the G. You could put that in a 2nd layer if you want or just keep it in the first and have ties only on the B and D above it.
- m24 RH: There should be a trill on the F, or a just mordent to make it easier.

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Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM

Latios212 - Peronza Plaza

- m11 beat 4 is a B augmented chord, so the Gn should be an Fx. You could also add a D# underneath in the RH to give that chord a little extra weight like in the original.
- Have you considered condensing m12 into the LH and adding those xylophone parts in the RH? I think it's fine as-is, but I'm just wondering.
- I'd add a B in between the G# and D in m21 beat 4 just for some extra weight.
- m32: The resolution from Dn-F# (G#dim7) to C#-E# (C#maj) in m33 is pretty prominent and sets it apart from m28-29. I'd try to find a way to incorporate those notes somehow.
- Maybe add some extra notes to m35 beats 1-2 LH?
- m37 beat 3 shouldn't be staccato.

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Quote from: Latios212 on February 09, 2020, 11:34:38 AM

BMI Results - Th3Gavst3r

Just a couple of small things:
- Flip the bottom tie downwards in "Normal" LH
- The last dyad in "Overweight" is a quarter here instead of a dotted quarter like underweight/obese. Is this intended?
- LH is missing rests in Overweight

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Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM

Th3Gavst3r - K.K. Gumbo

(from Discord)
- Turns out I miscounted the ghost notes - they're all there in the sheet.
- The Dn in m36 RH should be a C#.
With these changes I can approve.

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Quote from: Latios212 on February 16, 2020, 06:09:19 PM- I'm hearing this piece in 3/4 instead of 6/8 due to the percussion. The chime and the bell alternate every quarter beat.

Quote from: Static on February 17, 2020, 02:42:08 PM

Static - The Salt Flats

- I hear it in 6/8 also because of the percussion, and the melody, and the other instruments (and for the reasons msf mentioned). Looks like Square agrees too... (https://youtu.be/farg5w50YXY)
- I purposely left it out there because 5 notes is a lot in one hand and also bc the Bb plays just 3 8th notes later. I still don't really think it's necessary, but I've added them in anyway.
- Fixed.
- Fixed.
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Quote from: Static on February 13, 2020, 01:50:48 PM- I agree, but that's how most sources have it... Alternatively, you could use the full name, Dimensional Dream.
- m55 has A#s in the LH, so I think it would be warranted here. Up to you though.

Quote from: Rubikium on February 18, 2020, 03:29:10 AM

Treat Land

Updated file seems good! I have nothing to change.

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Meringue Clouds

Updated files (http://drive.google.com/open?id=1AI4gjMRtB9tcwaaiYhpv4g4mF27gKhoa) (ver02)

- Accepting the changes and the suggestion.

- Notes added

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 07:19:57 PM- RH beat 4 of m25 should be a dotted eighth - sixteenth rhythm, instead of two eighth notes.
- For m3-4, I think the main problem with it is that those jumps are really big for such a short period of time, so something like this would be much easier:
- I would also recommend something like this for m1-2 because I think that re-articulating the same note on in a 16th-note span is quite hard when playing dyads and doesn't add that much IMO
- You might also consider raising the D on beat 1.75 in m4 LH by an octave, and/or modifying the consecutive 16ths in m26 LH beat 4, because consecutive 16ths are really hard to play with just the pinky. Haven't played piano in a while, though, so you might disagree.
- Nitpick, but I'm used to seeing the segno (m5) directly above the barline.
- I would personally notate the D in m26 as a half note just because it looks cleaner and doesn't make things more confusing by not showing beat 3. Matter of preference.
EDIT: I would also move the "& Dan Miyakawa" down to the next line so the "Composition by" text isn't so far under the title/subtitle.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 17, 2020, 08:18:04 PM- Perhaps include parentheses on LH beat 3.5 of m5 to avoid confusion, since both hands are playing the same note there.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 17, 2020, 08:18:04 PM- A long time ago, Ben once told me that the space between the "Arranged by" text and the second line of the "Composed by" text should be the same as the space between the two "Composed by" text lines (i.e. equal spacing between all three lines). I don't know if anyone really cares anymore (I don't mind it as is), but I thought I'd at least mention it.

QuoteKirby Super Star [SNES]

"Peanut Plain" (Replacement)

MUS (https://goo.gl/Aw9uRJ)

MUSX (https://goo.gl/l83OSF)

MIDI (https://goo.gl/mo61Iz)

PDF (https://goo.gl/OZW8Ix)

Original (https://goo.gl/w68L1k)

Pokémon Stadium [N64]

"Sushi-Go-Round"

MUS (https://tinyurl.com/su2l7nv)

MUSX (https://tinyurl.com/s489fmo)

MIDI (https://tinyurl.com/r35jrn6)

PDF (https://tinyurl.com/uqgqcez)

Original (https://tinyurl.com/u7anqzs)

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 19, 2020, 07:32:52 PM

Acorn Plains (New Super Mario Bros. U) - LeviR.star

- Any reason why the tempo marking and swing marking are separate from each either? I typically see them next to each other, and the current layout makes the tempo marking easier to miss since it's higher up.
- You might consider a grace note on RH beat 1 of m5 to simulate the onset of the whistle in the original.
- m12 and m24 should have an E under the C on RH beat 1.5.
- Measures m17-m24 are identical to m5-12, both in the sheet and in the original track. The theme actually loops at the end of m16, at which point the sheet should repeat and jump back to m5. If you decreased the spacing between systems (and fit four measures into one system somewhere), you could easily fit this on one page after making this change.

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Quote from: Latios212 on February 19, 2020, 05:46:30 PM

K.K. Gumbo - Th3Gavst3r

- I'd suggest putting the RH in bass clef when it gets low (for instance, most of the first page).
- The "2." for the second ending in m. 27 is a bit far to the right.

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Quote from: Maelstrom on February 19, 2020, 06:03:15 PM

K.K. Gumbo - Gav

Piggybacking on what lat said, I agree and would also recommend not beaming over rests. Going bass clef might solve your beaming woes, however. Up to you on this one I guess.

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Quote from: Th3Gavst3r on January 31, 2020, 09:02:20 PM[GCN] Animal Crossing

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K.K. Gumbo		(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FcZKANx&hash=667b5b70f3bcc4250dec6795fb0e9f6e1f2c4d28) (https://youtu.be/RJ50YpdaFR0)		(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FiETSb2&hash=db6ffad49fb0a63e0293cc0c70daf9405f4f9318) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/5p6ww1g9rpm7bqy/K.K.%20Gumbo.pdf?dl=1)	(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FNzw6x1&hash=3b5aa27a52bf0dc60cb5d87fd678b18f260099b4) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/mfw8ohtl1ehlden/K.K.%20Gumbo.mus?dl=1)	(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fgoo.gl%2FWJ76OR&hash=24449915ccff4ce908a9feb34d2c6ba3f7f0856d) (https://www.dropbox.com/s/bs0t8yauln4z9qp/K.K.%20Gumbo.mid?dl=1)	[musx] (https://www.dropbox.com/s/m0s9bwef6ngy4pp/K.K.%20Gumbo.musx?dl=1)

Quote from: Static on February 28, 2020, 06:47:20 PMMcDucky - Alchemy Pot
- I really am not fond of the double key signature thing going on here... It doesn't really sound like a polytonic piece (just some very colorful chords), and even if it was, having multiple key signatures is more confusing to read in my opinion.
- That said, if other people think it's really a good idea to have this, I would put the 6 naturals at the beginning of each line where they should appear instead of all that empty space. I'd prefer the entire thing be keyless though...

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 23, 2020, 06:51:12 PM

Teatime Joy (Fire Emblem: Three Houses) - Latios212

This sounds like what you get when you cross My Sims and Kirby's Epic Yarn.
- Courtesy natural on the G in m28 LH?
- I'm guessing you omitted the LH in m13/30 to avoid voice crossing on beat 2, but I think it feels a little empty compared to the original. If not in the original register, then maybe include it an octave down? That said, you have voice crossing happening at lots of other places, so I don't see why it wouldn't be fine in the original register. I would just like those notes to be there somehow.
- Since you made m8 RH beat 2 a dyad, you might consider doing the same for RH beat 2 of m18, m25, and m34. (A G added to beat 2 of m34 sounds quite nice imo.)

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 21, 2020, 07:57:13 PM

Peronza Plaza (Super Mario Odyssey) - Latios212

- There are pickup notes to beat 1 of m2 LH (two 16th notes: C# and D#, at the end of m1).
- To me, the B on m12 RH beat 1 doesn't sound like it works super well. Since it doesn't actually seem to be from the original, I would suggest either changing it to a G#, an E (octave below top note), or just omit the second note entirely.
- You might consider moving the 8th notes in m12-13 to the LH and using the RH to incorporate the high ascending part there.
- In the original RH harmonies, there's a C# on beat 4 of m20 and an E on beat 1 of m21 (doubles the melody an octave down). You might consider adding them for extra emphasis on these notes (like in the original).
- m23 RH beat 2.75 should be a D# instead of an E.
- Beat 4 of m28 LH should be a G# instead of a B.
- Maybe this is just v26 being weird, but for me, the staccato on beat 2 of m31 RH is above the stem rather than below the notehead.
- You might consider a courtesy B natural in m35.
- DID YOU KNOW? The tempo is actually 115 BPM instead of 116.

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Quote from: Static on February 29, 2020, 11:19:25 AM

Static - Florence's Groovy Disco

Done and done.

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Sebastian - Cooking with Zess T.

- Discussed the E in m15 with Latios, we decided it would be best to leave it out even if it is there to match the surrounding measures and because the E comes right on the next 8th note. I'll be approving this one.

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Quote from: Latios212 on February 29, 2020, 11:07:46 AM

Rubikium - Time for Dessert!

Rubikium, I edited the files with the above as well as some formatting fixes (mostly the margins and text box alignment but also adjusting the cross-staff beam angle in m. 15). If this looks good to you I'll accept :)

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Quote from: Rubikium on February 29, 2020, 11:56:20 AMOther than the possibly misplaced accent on beat 3.5 in m.14, the sheet seems fine to me.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 29, 2020, 11:50:42 AM

Peronza Plaza (Super Mario Odyssey) - Latios

The only other suggestion I have would be to explicitly write out the grace notes in m1 as a sixteenth-note triplet (RH) and a sixteenth-note pair (LH). These notes here have a more clear cut rhythm that's easy to write out compared to the other grace notes in this sheet, and they feel less like ornamentations and more like part of the actual line to me. (The rhythm of the LH grace notes is different in m1 and m37, for instance, but the sheet doesn't denote that right now.)

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Quote from: Maelstrom on February 29, 2020, 12:52:51 PMThere's a few extra notes that would be nice to include because they help the overall progression of the song. Most of what I hear is in measures like 2 and 3, there's this in the RH, +/- some note length:
(https://i.imgur.com/52j0som.jpg)
I only hear this when the melody isn't playing and that 4 measure progression is playing. So 2/3, 19/20, and 35/36.

That's it.

Quote from: Maelstrom on February 29, 2020, 01:43:40 PMLat's Teatime Joy and Working Dough have been accepted

Cooking Mama - Title Screen:
m1 b3 LH - Bb should be a C. Same thing in m39
As for the composer, I was able to find his name as "Chamy" or "CHAMY.Ishi" more places. You can just call him "Masayoshi Ishi" and avoid nicknames altogether. Speaking of which, I only found him listed on some obscure site of unknown repute, but it's better than nothing. Too bad cooking mama isn't in VGMDB.

That is all

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 11, 2020, 07:49:47 PMGreat sheet of a very interesting (and complicated) track (although some parts hurt my wrists just looking at it, lol). The only thing I was wondering about is whether you had considered writing m27-32 in three 3/4-bar phrases. Though I can't hear a clear subdivision of beats either way, I was thinking it might subdivide the right hand better in m27-28 and the left hand better in m31-32, and it also is more continuous with the rest of the sheet and m33 onwards. The way you have it now also makes sense, though, since it's continuous with the 4/4 in m25-26 and splits everything into 2-bar phrases. It's up to you and how you hear it/want it to be expressed, but I just wanted to offer the possibility.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 11, 2020, 07:49:47 PMAlso I don't play much piano so you probably know more than I do here, but I'm used to seeing pedal markings in the same system vertically aligned? i.e. m13 and m21 look kind of weird to me since one pedal marking is higher than the other, but this might be a perfectly acceptable way of notation that I just haven't seen before.

Quote from: Static on February 28, 2020, 06:47:20 PM

McDucky - Alchemy Pot

- I really am not fond of the double key signature thing going on here... It doesn't really sound like a polytonic piece (just some very colorful chords), and even if it was, having multiple key signatures is more confusing to read in my opinion.
- That said, if other people think it's really a good idea to have this, I would put the 6 naturals at the beginning of each line where they should appear instead of all that empty space. I'd prefer the entire thing be keyless though...
- The 2nd quarter note in m7 should be split into 2 tied 8th notes to match the 6/8 beaming.
- Because you're switching from compound to simple time, the beginning of the 4/4 bar should have an 8th note=8th note marking to indicate no change in tempo (that the 8th note pulse stays constant).

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Quote from: Maelstrom on February 26, 2020, 05:29:28 PM

Alchemy Pot - McDucky

I've just got one comment: What is the double barline doing at the end of m6? It's not really doing anything and there's another barline the measure after. I'd say it should just be removed.

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Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 29, 2020, 05:12:06 PMHmm, I'm still seeing this. Perhaps it's just an error that happens when importing into v26?

The only other thing I have to say is that the parentheses and the flat are clashing on m19 beat 4, so the flat could be moved a little to the left.

Quote from: Libera on February 29, 2020, 05:14:34 PMI don't see these.

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 21, 2020, 10:25:53 PMm8 m10 LH: Dyad at beat 2.5 should have an A# added on top.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 29, 2020, 05:23:28 PM- I'd move the pedal lift under m33 up close to the staff; I got confused at first because I thought it was placed on top of m35, rather than at the bottom of m33.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 29, 2020, 05:23:28 PM- You might consider a double barline at the end of m24, and/or at the end of m32.

Quote from: Radiak488417 on February 29, 2020, 05:52:23 PMACK I meant measure 10! Hate to be this nitpicky but I'm sure it's there.  Also, Latios, I'm not sure if you saw what I said about the LH high B# in measure 8 but I really can't hear it at all. (Hope this feedback is okay even though it's accepted already...)

Quote from: Libera on February 29, 2020, 05:53:15 PMI don't really see how this could be confusing.  I moved it up a little anyway, but I think it's fine.

Ok, sure.

Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 29, 2020, 06:59:53 PM- Small thing, but personally I would remove the accent on the m49 RH chord since it implies that that chord is played more forcefully than the chords before it, which isn't really the case—it's a smoothly moving phrase with constant volume, not with it suddenly becoming more forceful as it reaches the last note.

Quote from: Rubikium on February 29, 2020, 11:29:02 PMUpdated Files (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1CDZuixsacysOBlp-KNCJqu3TNLBQ8Se0) (ver04)

Comment:I add the accent in m.49 to make the playback volume of R.H remain roughly the same around the p dynamic. I have removed it in the file but the playback could still be adjusted to intended.

Quote from: Static on February 29, 2020, 05:02:48 PM

McDucky - Alchemy Pot

- Looks good, I'd just flatten the tie in m7-8, it's a little too round compared to the other ties.

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Quote from: McDucky on March 01, 2020, 03:47:16 AMDone. There was a reason for it, but not anymore.