Submission Information:
Series: Star Fox
Game: Star Fox
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Corneria
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/1866) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/1866) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/1866)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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I think this is the first time I have ever listened to the original. The tune is still catchy, but their instrument choice makes it sound awful. Nice job on the arrangement though. I will try to find ways to improve it if I find the time.
This is a better version of the song:
I don't see any formatting or aesthetic issues. I'll compare it to the original when I get home from work...
Alrrightttty...feedbach tiieeem:
- Arrangement is spelled "arrangement" you have "arrangment"
- Courtesy natural on the D in M. 21 (RH).
- Playability in M. 1-4 & 21?
- The "2" and "23" are mighty close to each other. You could slightly adjust the formatting so they're not on top of each other.
- Traditionally, in all the professional music I've seen, the second ending line is connected (or at the very least encompassing the entire measure) to the first ending (unless it's doesn't have a line extending the entire way, like this sheet for example:
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3801 )
Go ahead and move the "2." bracket in M. 22 over to the left until it's pretty close or right on top of the first ending bracket (Basically, just encompass the time signature in the bracket).
That's all I have for this one. Could I get another Updater to double check notes so we can accept this one?
Quote from: Sebastian on July 03, 2018, 06:33:27 AM- Arrangement is spelled "arrangement" you have "arrangment"
...i must atone for my sins. Fixed.
Quote from: Sebastian on July 03, 2018, 06:33:27 AM- Playability in M. 1-4 & 21?
idk man. I suppose I could put a "leave bottom layer out if necessary" for m.21 like in my FFIV Battle theme? Not entirely sure how I could really condense the beginning, though...
Otherwise, everything else should be fixed.
I think that's fine as is then. Aproovd
(https://i.imgur.com/DcHBdIQ.jpg)
it keeps happening
Quote from: Maelstrom on July 05, 2018, 04:09:56 PM(https://i.imgur.com/DcHBdIQ.jpg)
it keeps happening
(https://i.gifer.com/4KB9.gif)
...Honestly, I don't know what to do. It opens just fine on my computer/version of Finale - it's likely a conversion error between people's differing versions of Finale.
The PDF is borked. If you can make that look good, then it's not a problem.
I went ahead and took care of the ending brackets problem, they're aligned on all the files now. I have nothing more to say for this sheet, it looks good! I shall accept.
This submission has been accepted by Static (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4960).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot