Submission Information:
Series: Ace Attorney
Game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Marvin Grossberg ~ Old Age, Regret, Retribution
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3620)
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Again, sorry for the lack of response. Here's the link to the previous submission: http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=9872
To answer the query about the mordents, yes it was due to Finale playback that I have included them instead of grace notes. At the moment though, the playback sounds off only in m 6.
Looks good!
Only one thing I noticed:
It's best to put quarter note = 90, just so it's clear that you mean that rather than a eighth note etc. Just be super clear with tempo markings! I suggest notating it like this:
Swing (swing marking)
quarter note = 90
Cool, thanks for the handy advice, I've updated the files. :)
Nice work. Notes are great.
Few things:
- You put slurs on some of the grace notes, but not all of them. For examples, M. 6 & 8.
- Put a courtesy natural on the B in M. 13 (RH).
- Also, on that same note, make the parenthesis farther apart. It's really close to that note. Same as the note in M. 15 (with parentheses).
- Put a courtesy natural on the B in M. 15 (LH).
- The top staff in M. 12 could be confusing to some. It looks like there is an eighth between the quarter notes with that quarter rest hidden. I would recommend un-hiding the rest and moving the eighth rest down a bit.
- I'd mess with the formatting a bit to give the arranger names and composer name more room, but I'll leave this one up to you.
That's all I have for this one.
In case you didn't notice, you made a typo in your name on the sheet.
Onionelaf
Haha, Onionélaf sounds like a name for some fancy French cuisine. :D
I made all those adjustments, thanks!
2 comments
-Should the DS arranger be bolded, since he's an arranger?
-Grace notes should be slured, but aren't those phrases already slurred in the first place?
Quote from: Maelstrom on July 05, 2018, 04:43:44 PM2 comments
-Should the DS arranger be bolded, since he's an arranger?
-Grace notes should be slured, but aren't those phrases already slurred in the first place?
Not sure if these comments were intended for me or not? ??? I simply followed the same formatting that has been used in previous sheets, so not sure if it's worth making these changes?
never mind then.
Sheet's great, so I'll accept it.
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot