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NinSheetMusic => Submission Center => Submission Archive => Topic started by: Zeta on July 25, 2018, 08:00:47 PM

Title: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on July 25, 2018, 08:00:47 PM
Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Lilycove City
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83)

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Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on July 25, 2018, 08:00:55 PM

While it's fresh on the mind.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 01, 2018, 04:54:57 AM
Weekly bump.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on August 04, 2018, 09:00:12 AM
Just a couple of minor comments from me:
- I've always heard the figure at the end of m. 13 as part of the melody as opposed to an embellishment, and think it would be better written as 32nd notes since the B falls exactly on beat 3. This isn't something you have to change, just thought I'd mention it.
- Suggestion: try a measure distribution of 5-6-6-4-5 measures per system on page 2, since currently the first and fourth systems are noticeably more cramped than the third and fifth.

Looks great!
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 04, 2018, 01:56:13 PM
Changes made.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2018, 09:10:02 AM
Oops, now they're up.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on August 05, 2018, 09:13:18 AM
Nice! Looks good to me.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Maelstrom on August 05, 2018, 11:14:57 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/Atcfb5Z.jpg)
Slurs are hitting the triplet 3s. Fix that and I approve as well.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2018, 11:25:34 AM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on August 04, 2018, 01:56:13 PMChanges made.
Title: Re: [3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2018, 11:26:40 AM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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