Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Sun & Pokémon Moon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Lillie's Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83)
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Weekly bump.
Nice work! Glad to see more Sun/Moon stuff.
- Spacing in m. 7-8 - the stem on the Cn is too close to the ties in the LH, and there's a large amount of space at the beginning of m. 8 (for accidentals that aren't shown?)
- Grace note in m. 11 sounds to me like it should be descending to the melody note, not ascending to it
- A courtesy natural would do nicely on the G in the right hand in m. 19 (possibly the left hand, too).
- m. 33 beat 3 sounds like it dips down to a Gb instead of going back up to Db.
-Adjusted.
-It's an A. Edited.
-Added to both hands.
-Meh, can sound like it, but when you mess with the audio there's definitely a Db there.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2018, 01:18:57 PM-Meh, can sound like it, but when you mess with the audio there's definitely a Db there.
I messed with the audio and I agree with latios. The accordion goes to a Gb 100%.
Well, I messed with the audio and I agree with Olimar. The accordion goes to a Db 100%.
Latios messaged me for an opinion and I did some audio messing too:
[4:55 PM] Dudeman: Well, okay, this is interesting
[4:55 PM] Dudeman: The first time it went through my ear holes, I heard a Db
[4:55 PM] Dudeman: But then after repeating it, I heard Gb
[4:56 PM] Dudeman: OH I KNOW WHY
[4:56 PM] Dudeman: There's a subtle violin in the background
[4:57 PM] Dudeman: It starts on beat 2 and plays 8th notes Gb A Db, and that Db intersects with the accordion Gb on beat 3
[4:57 PM] Latios: Ah...
[4:57 PM] Dudeman: Because of the low volume and similar tone, it blends with the accordion and makes the illusion that the accordion is playing a Db.
[4:57 PM] Dudeman: There is a Db there, but it is not the accordion.
[4:57 PM] Latios: That makes sense, and is pretty much what I expected to hear
[4:58 PM] Dudeman: You can hear the violin Db very clearly through beat 3 and beat 1 of the next measure
So technically, everyone is right! However, since the arrangement's melody follows the accordion line at this point, I would change the note to a Gb.
Ah, I see. Files have been fixed.
Bump? What happened? We were like done here.
Looks good to me
Excellent.
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).
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