Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Monster Hunter: World
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Meowscular Chef's Custom Platter
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)
[attachment deleted by admin]
Haha wow this is a great song really catchy ;D
Just a couple things:
- You could move everything down on the page a bit
- Switch the Capcom and 2018 in the copyright
- Measure 3 sounds like A minor to me so I'm not too sure about the F#s in the offbeat left hand notes. Mind double checking that for me?
- Probably take out the high F# in m. 4 LH beat 2.5 to avoid collision with the right hand
- Flip the slur in m. 7?
- I'd suggest turning those dotted halves in m. 9 into rests. The notes don't sustain that long in the original
That's all, nice to see you submit something again :P
Quote from: Latios212 on September 22, 2018, 12:55:15 PM- You could move everything down on the page a bit
- Switch the Capcom and 2018 in the copyright
- Measure 3 sounds like A minor to me so I'm not too sure about the F#s in the offbeat left hand notes. Mind double checking that for me?
- Probably take out the high F# in m. 4 LH beat 2.5 to avoid collision with the right hand
- Flip the slur in m. 7?
- I'd suggest turning those dotted halves in m. 9 into rests. The notes don't sustain that long in the original
All suggestions included!
Well done! ;)
This is great! Only one comment from me: could we
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/492809359961882625/493441551910043648/unknown.png?
Wouldn't that be nice?
Quote from: Libera on September 23, 2018, 08:21:26 AMWouldn't that be nice?
I can't believe I didn't add this. Thanks! :D
That's alright! I'm always happy to help.
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot