Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Splatoon 2
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Defeat- Jingle/Ink Another Day
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4742)
Defeat-Jingle
-I'm not hearing the A Ab G line in bar 1 that you've written in.
-In bar 2 on the dotted minim there should be a Cn and a Gb and no Gn.
-I'm also not convinced on the rhythm you've written out here. I can give suggestions if you'd like, but I don't think the way it's currently written is working.
Ink Another Day
Main thing here is the chords. I'm not sure that alternating D major C# minor is what's going on here. I'd take another look at them.
I'll have another check when you've updated the files.
I'm open to the suggestion. I'm having a terrible time figuring it out
The chords for Ink Another Day are: E7sus4 > F#min7/E > E7sus4 > Esus2 > D(add9)/F# > C#min7/G# > B7sus4 > Amaj9.
As for the defeat jingle, there is indeed a C natural in the second chord of measure 2 (personally, I'd place it in the right hand, but it can also work in the left), and the rythm in measure 2 sounds more like a quarter and an eighth in a triplet to me, with the eighth tied to the following dotted half note.
Quote from: Libera on October 20, 2018, 02:26:15 PMI'm not hearing the A Ab G line in bar 1 that you've written in.
You can't really make it out, but I think it's clear from the sound that these are power chords, in which case this line is definitely present. However, the Bb in measure 2 should get the same treatment, so the upper left hand note should be an F, not Gb.
Got it. I'll work on this as soon as I can
Bump for arranger.
Superbump for arranger
Going to archive this for inactivity. Feel free to resubmit whenever you want to.