Submission Information:
Series: Kingdom Hearts
Game: Kingdom Hearts
Console: PlayStation 2
Title: Treasured Memories
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)
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Notes look great! Two things though:
- I think this would make more sense in 6/4 as each phrase currently spans two 3/4 bars
- It seems a bit spacey... you could condense the last three systems into two but I can see why you wouldn't want to and I guess that's fine by me
Quote from: Latios212 on January 10, 2021, 07:54:54 PM- I think this would make more sense in 6/4 as each phrase currently spans two 3/4 bars
Ooh that's a good call. I'll take any chance to use weird time sigs :P
Quote from: Latios212 on January 10, 2021, 07:54:54 PM- It seems a bit spacey... you could condense the last three systems into two but I can see why you wouldn't want to and I guess that's fine by me
It's even more spacey with 6/4 measures, so I think the whole thing fits pretty comfortably on 2 systems now
Awesome. Approved :)
m5 and m8 both sound like there's an octave harmony below b1, shouldn't make it too much harder to play if you add it in.
Mabe give your ties a bit of breathing room? The slurs are getting awful close to them. Should be able to respace systems if the slurs need more space.
Otherwise, it looks great.
Quote from: Maelstrom on January 11, 2021, 01:14:24 PMm5 and m8 both sound like there's an octave harmony below b1, shouldn't make it too much harder to play if you add it in.
Oh yeah I think you're right. They're in.
Quote from: Maelstrom on January 11, 2021, 01:14:24 PMMabe give your ties a bit of breathing room? The slurs are getting awful close to them. Should be able to respace systems if the slurs need more space.
Moved all the slurs up a little bit
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