Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Under Night In-Birth
Console: Arcade
Title: Gathers Under Night
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Renaud Bergeron (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=3400)
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Nice song choice :3
- Missing piano staff name
- You could add a double barline before measure 19
- m1 Fx should be an eighth note and the last D# isn't there
- m2 maybe you could add a B and A# as grace notes to lead into the G# of the following measure to vaguely emulate the minor pitch drop
- m10 last two sixteenth notes sound like A#-B instead
- m19 flip the last sixteenth note group so the stems are down
- m21/23/25/26 I think it would be better to include chords at the beginning of these measures instead of just putting arpeggios
In addition to the above:
- m5-6 LH: The 16th notes sound like B-C# to me.
- m9 LH: Fxs should be F#s.
- m10 LH beat 2.5: These 16th notes sound like E-F#, but it's hard to tell.
- m10 LH beat 4.5: These 16th notes should be Fx-A#.
- The above also applies to m11-18.
- Ecole Software should be listed as a developer as well. And if you want to get technical, technically only Sega published the original arcade release. Arc System Works published the games starting with Exe:Late iirc.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PMm21/23/25/26 I think it would be better to include chords at the beginning of these measures instead of just putting arpeggios
- I think just the arpeggios would be fine here, considering the tempo. Using the pedal, that section still sounds full. Either way is fine though.
You still around to work on this one? It's been awhile
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM
Please, please let me get away with this one. We don't even have arrangements for other instruments on the site anymore.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- You could add a double barline before measure 19
I don't think the shift in character is large enough to warrant this.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- m1 Fx should be an eighth note and the last D# isn't there
Done.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- m2 maybe you could add a B and A# as grace notes to lead into the G# of the following measure to vaguely emulate the minor pitch drop
Interesting idea, but I think I prefer it straight.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- m10 last two sixteenth notes sound like A#-B instead
Done.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- m19 flip the last sixteenth note group so the stems are down
Done.
Quote from: Zeila on July 04, 2021, 05:04:09 PM- m21/23/25/26 I think it would be better to include chords at the beginning of these measures instead of just putting arpeggios
I agree with Static that given the speed + pedal I don't think it's necessary.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- m5-6 LH: The 16th notes sound like B-C# to me.
Done.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- m9 LH: Fxs should be F#s.
Done.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- m10 LH beat 2.5: These 16th notes sound like E-F#, but it's hard to tell.
Perhaps that's another voice? I'm pretty sure I can hear the bass doubling the melody here.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- m10 LH beat 4.5: These 16th notes should be Fx-A#.
I'm inclined to agree with Zeila: sounds more like A#>B to me.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- The above also applies to m11-18.
Fixed it there as well.
Quote from: Static on July 16, 2021, 07:49:38 AM- Ecole Software should be listed as a developer as well. And if you want to get technical, technically only Sega published the original arcade release. Arc System Works published the games starting with Exe:Late iirc.
This is the copyright information I've seen on every site pertaining to the game (minus PS logo etc. belonging to Sony, and licenses), as well as the only title screen I've found. I know Wikipedia lists Ecole Software as a developer but I'm not sure what to do here. Under Night In-Birth wiki lists only "Ecole Software / French Bread" under "production/rights" in the credits of the first game so IDK.
Thanks for the feedback.
I still hear the bassline as I heard it earlier - but m10 LH beat 4.5 I hear as G#-A# instead of Fx-A# now. Have you tried listening to it pitch-shifted up an octave?
The other changes look great, though the copyright should be separated with a comma instead of a slash.
Quote from: Static on October 05, 2021, 08:32:01 PMI still hear the bassline as I heard it earlier - but m10 LH beat 4.5 I hear as G#-A# instead of Fx-A# now. Have you tried listening to it pitch-shifted up an octave?
The other changes look great, though the copyright should be separated with a comma instead of a slash.
Hmm I see what you mean. I kind of hear it like [see sheet here] at the moment.
For the copyright, I wouldn't mind changing it to a comma if that's what's recommended, but I'd like to point out that I copied it exactly from what I've seen on sites/title screens, and that's why it looks like that.
Yeah, I think I'm kinda hearing that Fx-A# again in m10, though it's a bit hard to tell. Maybe someone else can take a look too. For the copyright, the comma just keeps the sheet consistent with the others on the site.
Edit: I see that you edited the files, looks good. I'll approve
It looks like the original YouTube link is dead now, does anyone have a substitute before I go looking for one?
Thanks!
Looking over the sheet I don't think I have anything to add - this looks great. Accepted it shall be~
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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