Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Umineko When They Cry Chiru
Console: PC
Title: Fall
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: SammrGuy03 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=7590)
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There were too many hearing inaccuracies for me to comment on, so I basically retranscribed the entire thing. Here (https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/844835144242298910/974402137566109696/Fall.musx)'s a link to that.
- I think you should include more roll markings throughout the piece, particularly in the beginning section.
- Pedal indication: I think it would make more sense for this to be placed below the lower staff, separate from the tempo marking. Like this it's more consistent with other sheets on-site.
- You can dot the half note at m8 b4 LH
- m9-10: I think by using two hands this part is playable with all notes in their original octaves.
- m12-18: Your use of cross-staff notation could use some going over, especially with the new file I provided. The lines between the staff should be dashed, otherwise they may be mistaken for glissandi.
- I think the LH could change clef at m19 already, F5 is too high to be in bass clef. This F5 is also doubled by the RH, I think it can be removed there.
- m19-28 RH would probably best be written all under one ottava, perhaps move the F4 grace note at the beginning down to the LH, where it's more easily playable.
- m23-26: If this piece is to be played with pedal, I think using several layers here is excessive. The dotted half notes can't be sustained for that length without pedal anyway.
- m27-28: I changed the roll markings, usually the arrow on top is not needed (unless there is a down arrow one nearby). I would also show the fourth rest at m28 b4. For this section, perhaps use a rit. marking rather than two consecutive fermate; it's okay for the last note to keep it though.
- Page Layout and similar stuff can be worked on at a later point in time.
Bump for arranger. You around to respond on this?
I'm gonna archive this for inactivity, feel free to resubmit when you're around again!