Submission Information:
Series: Mario Party
Game: Mario Party 7
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Fun in the Sun
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
• Usually we recommend including slurs on grace notes
• m2 and m32 RH 2.5 you could add a Gn on bottom here (the Gn is technically this pitch anyway). 4.0 not hearing Gn in this chord (could make bottom F#)
• m6 and m14 RH 3.0 I think this is a Cn on bottom not D
• m10 RH hearing 2.5 restruck on 3.0 (same notes). Also for m10, same comment as m2 RH 4.0
• m17 LH beat 1 and 4 sound like full note length and no staccato
• m26 RH 1.0 hearing Gb as Ab
• m28 RH 2.5 is a bit wacky, hearing top to bottom #G-F#-En-A#
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 02, 2024, 07:27:05 PMm10 RH hearing 2.5 restruck on 3.0 (same notes).
I just wanna make sure this wasn't a typo or anything, cause I don't hear that at all, even using AudioStretch.
Other than that, I've made the rest of the edits and updated the files.
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 02, 2024, 07:27:05 PMUsually we recommend including slurs on grace notes
When I was importing this into Finale, I kept telling myself, "Don't forget to add slurs to the grace notes, you always forget to do that", and then I forgot. And
then I forgot to add them again when making these edits. They are there now.
Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on March 03, 2024, 08:31:21 AMWhen I was importing this into Finale, I kept telling myself, "Don't forget to add slurs to the grace notes, you always forget to do that", and then I forgot. And then I forgot to add them again when making these edits. They are there now.
Heh for the longest time I just forgot to include them
Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on March 03, 2024, 08:24:32 AMI just wanna make sure this wasn't a typo or anything, cause I don't hear that at all, even using AudioStretch.
Other than that, I've made the rest of the edits and updated the files.
Relistened, I agree with you.
Couple small things but will give you the
approval (just handle before next updater), hearing m17 RH 4.0 as a full length note (no staccato), and you could also move the systems down a little on the first page. Can just move from the top of page 1 system 1 and it will move everything (this is to eliminate extra space at bottom of page 1 and line the systems up between the pages a tiny bite more)
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 04, 2024, 07:33:12 PMhearing m17 RH 4.0 as a full length note (no staccato), and you could also move the systems down a little on the first page. Can just move from the top of page 1 system 1 and it will move everything (this is to eliminate extra space at bottom of page 1 and line the systems up between the pages a tiny bite more)
Done!
Looking pretty good, just two tiny things I noticed!
-m6 and 14: I don't really hear the lower R.H. notes in beats 3-4.5 (the C, E and D), and they're quite hard to get to after coming from beat 2.5 too. Maybe you could leave those out? You could then also add accents if you want those notes to come out a bit more
-m18: You could also write the tied L.H. G's in beat 3.5 and 4 as a dotted quarter note, if you prefer that
Quote from: Bloop on March 09, 2024, 09:51:34 AM-m6 and 14: I don't really hear the lower R.H. notes in beats 3-4.5 (the C, E and D), and they're quite hard to get to after coming from beat 2.5 too. Maybe you could leave those out? You could then also add accents if you want those notes to come out a bit more
I still hear the notes, but I understand removing them for the sake of playability. Done. I don't think it needs accents, though, I think it would sound out of place.
Quote from: Bloop on March 09, 2024, 09:51:34 AM-m18: You could also write the tied L.H. G's in beat 3.5 and 4 as a dotted quarter note, if you prefer that
I didn't even notice that, thank you.Files are updated!
Awesome, then I'll accept!
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).
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