Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Tetris
Console: Game Boy
Title: Game Over/Stage Clear
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Code_Name_Geek (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5670)
A much simpler submission to balance out my other one.
So only thing I had a question about is why is the title called "Success!" for the second sheet when the video title is "Finish!"?
Edit 3/18 noticed dynamics missing, you could add mf. Think "Success" (or whichever decided upon name) would be better as a single bar
Quote from: Kricketune54 on March 14, 2024, 08:21:30 PMSo only thing I had a question about is why is the title called "Success!" for the second sheet when the video title is "Finish!"?
Edit 3/18 noticed dynamics missing, you could add mf. Think "Success" (or whichever decided upon name) would be better as a single bar
Done! "Success!" has been renamed to "Stage Clear" since it seems to be the more common name.
Changes look good! Approved
Notes look good! I do have a couple of quick things to say about the presentation though.
- 1-2 measures taking up the entire system length is super stretched out. I'd recommend shortening them, even if they don't use the full width of the page.
- I think the beat is displaced in Stage Clear. It would probably make sense to have the two 16th notes as a pickup so the Eb major chords fall on the downbeats.
Quote from: Latios212 on March 18, 2024, 03:01:47 PMNotes look good! I do have a couple of quick things to say about the presentation though.
- 1-2 measures taking up the entire system length is super stretched out. I'd recommend shortening them, even if they don't use the full width of the page.
- I think the beat is displaced in Stage Clear. It would probably make sense to have the two 16th notes as a pickup so the Eb major chords fall on the downbeats.
Sounds good to me, done! Thanks for the help!
Looks good! I'llaccept!
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This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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