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Title: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Zeta on March 06, 2024, 02:03:03 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Undertale/Deltarune
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Memory
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: XiaoMigros (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=6725)
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on March 06, 2024, 02:04:06 PM

short and sweet submission
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Latios212 on March 06, 2024, 04:44:09 PM
Quote from: XiaoMigros on March 06, 2024, 02:04:06 PMshort and sweet submission
thank you :P

The sheet looks fantastic, just a couple of small things to ask about.
- I haven't seen "tutto 8va" before. Do you think that's clear (and conspicuous, it's kinda small) enough that it applies to both hands for the whole piece?
- The 1./2. ending numbers could be poked left a bit to align with the position of the beat 1 eighth rests.
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on March 07, 2024, 10:27:51 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on March 06, 2024, 04:44:09 PM- I haven't seen "tutto 8va" before. Do you think that's clear (and conspicuous, it's kinda small) enough that it applies to both hands for the whole piece?
That's a fair point, I opted to use the more common '8va sempre' instead.

Thanks for taking a look!
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Latios212 on March 07, 2024, 03:58:51 PM
Quote from: XiaoMigros on March 07, 2024, 10:27:51 AMThat's a fair point, I opted to use the more common '8va sempre' instead.
As food for thought, I recall Bespinben using "both hands" next to an 8va marking (context (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=8765.msg352155#msg352155), example (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3196) sheets (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3205)), which I've personally found to be both simple and clear. Not everyone agreed though. I'll leave it up to you!

Anyway, I will approve as everything looks good here!
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Bloop on March 09, 2024, 09:59:22 AM
Looking good! Maybe you could write the L.H. in treble clef instead of bass clef, since it's all in ledger line territory?
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: XiaoMigros on March 11, 2024, 02:58:21 AM
I'd rather keep it in the bass clef, as I think the ledger lines are pretty readable as is and it's worth the added comfort of LH in bass clef, RH in treble that pianists are best accustomed to :)
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Bloop on March 11, 2024, 01:42:53 PM
Alrighty, then I'll accept!
Title: Re: [PC] Undertale - "Memory" by XiaoMigros
Post by: Zeta on March 11, 2024, 01:43:02 PM
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot