Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Batman: The Video Game
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Game Over
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
This thread will now be used to talk about controversial Batman opinions. I'm sure the updaters will love it!
Here's the link to the transcription I did of this song that I used as a reference: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/8il4m8i78sy93etlz9id1/h?rlkey=fst5xueox2cwb2lr0y7qyp4jc&dl=0
This looks very nice, notes all look good! Just two things I wanted to mention:
-The game title and arranger text look like they're a bit far from the song title and composer text, maybe you could raise them a bit?
-Optionally, you could try imitating the drums with the bass pattern into something like this:
Schermafbeelding 2024-03-16 112119.png
So pretty much using the bass notes an octave lower than the original for bass drums, and fill the empty spaces where the snare hits are with a C an octave above. If you prefer keeping it true to the original square and triangle waves parts that's alright too though ^^
Quote from: Bloop on March 16, 2024, 03:23:55 AMThis looks very nice, notes all look good!
(https://i1.sndcdn.com/artworks-000363642507-1s1ko7-t500x500.jpg)
Quote from: Bloop on March 16, 2024, 03:23:55 AM-The game title and arranger text look like they're a bit far from the song title and composer text, maybe you could raise them a bit?
Let me know if that's any better
Quote from: Bloop on March 16, 2024, 03:23:55 AM-Optionally, you could try imitating the drums with the bass pattern into something like this:
Schermafbeelding 2024-03-16 112119.png
So pretty much using the bass notes an octave lower than the original for bass drums, and fill the empty spaces where the snare hits are with a C an octave above.
I thought about it, but I don't think I'm going to do this. I had thought about putting in a con pedale to match the reverb on the melody and alleviate some of the same issues you're getting at, but it didn't sound good when I tried it.
Quote from: Yug_Guy on March 16, 2024, 10:55:27 AMLet me know if that's any better
It still looks kinda far apart: maybe compare with some of the screenshots in the formatting guidelines (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=12766.0). I won't hold up my approval over it though :p
Quote from: Yug_Guy on March 16, 2024, 10:55:27 AMI thought about it, but I don't think I'm going to do this. I had thought about putting in a con pedale to match the reverb on the melody and alleviate some of the same issues you're getting at, but it didn't sound good when I tried it.
That's alright! Tbh I don't mind the pedal either haha, but I'll
approve either way ^^
Quote from: Yug_Guy on March 11, 2024, 06:01:57 PMThis thread will now be used to talk about controversial Batman opinions. I'm sure the updaters will love it!
I have none to offerNotes look good, nothing to add there! Before I accept, if you wouldn't mind, I'd suggest giving this topic a read and update this sheet (and whatever template you use) accordingly: [Text alignment and page margins] (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=10719.0). Basically, the margins are a bit lopsided. Sorry to be nitpicky, but I think this should be a simple thing to clean up once and not worry about for future sheets too :)
All done!
Aaaa sorry I had forgotten to point out the https :') sorry! I can update that for you if it's too much trouble
Alrighty! Then it's accept time!
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=49938;image)
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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