Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: OneShot
Console: PC
Title: Puzzle Solved
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Francesca Minasi (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=8245)
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Nice work! Note-wise, the main thing I have to say is that the B's on beat 4 and 4.75 of measure 1 sound like F# instead.
For formatting, mind giving this topic (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=10719.0) a read? The left margin is abnormally large and the footer text exceed the bottom margin. Other than that, the 120 in the tempo marking should be un-bold and you can probably move the composer/arranger info, as well as the top staff, down away from the header a little bit.
QuoteNice work! Note-wise, the main thing I have to say is that the B's on beat 4 and 4.75 of measure 1 sound like F# instead.
Updated!
QuoteFor formatting, mind giving this topic a read? The left margin is abnormally large and the footer text exceed the bottom margin. Other than that, the 120 in the tempo marking should be un-bold and you can probably move the composer/arranger info, as well as the top staff, down away from the header a little bit.
Should all be good now.
Thank you for the feedback!
All I have to add is that fermatas on 16th notes at the end of a piece like this are a little odd, I would recommend adding an extra measure with whole notes (or whole rests, because pedal) and add the fermatas there.
QuoteAll I have to add is that fermatas on 16th notes at the end of a piece like this are a little odd, I would recommend adding an extra measure with whole notes (or whole rests, because pedal) and add the fermatas there.
Updated! I removed the fermata, since the whole note is long enough. Is that fine?
Thanks for the feedback!
Sorry I forgot to mention earlier it looks like a dynamic marking (p or mp perhaps?) is missing. Everything else looks good! :)
QuoteSorry I forgot to mention earlier it looks like a dynamic marking (p or mp perhaps?) is missing. Everything else looks good!
Updated! I put
mp.
Thanks for the feedback!
Great! You're welcome, and this sheet looks good to me. Approved! :D
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Without fermata is fine by me, accepted
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