Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: StreetPass Mii Plaza
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Your Garden (Flower Town)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)
I forgot I had a slot open all this time, so here's something super simple, so as to take less time away from other submissions.
I listed the game as StreetPass Mii Plaza and put the sub-game (Flower Town) in the track title, similar to the recent Nintendo Music release of the base games. Composer info from here (https://nintendo.fandom.com/wiki/Flower_Town/credits#Music).
Nice piece.
I don't hear any notes different to transcribed. I think there is a strings doubling the bottom note of the chord down an octave, but that seems silly to include.
The con pedale direction may lead performers to hold the pedal for 2 bars, whereas including some |______| then a simile would probably convey a more accurate pedaling technique.
I also see nothing wrong with the notes. I see what goldenscruff is saying about the con pedale. I think either way works without too much detriment (for example, if I were to play this I'd probably hold the pedal for two bars anyways since I've gotta be hitting those RH overlap notes.) Looks like a great sheet though!
Got nothing to add, nice work. Also how is this our first and only Flower Town sheet?? That can't be right... I'll be sure to rectify that sometime soon.
Taking a quick look now, notes all seem good! Some small things to consider:
-m10, 12, 14-16: Maybe you could put these measures in the G clef too, as they're technically part of the "high" piano part? They have a similar amount of ledger lines below the staff as they have above atm.
Alternatively, in these same measures, you could cross-staff the notes from beat 1.5 on to the R.H., as the R.H. is already in that range anyway and it helps seeing you don't necessarily need to hold the chords in those measures pressed
-Maybe not necessary, but you could add a courtesy accidental on m20 beat 3 in the R.H.
Quote from: Radiak488417 on March 09, 2025, 10:15:32 PMGot nothing to add, nice work. Also how is this our first and only Flower Town sheet?? That can't be right... I'll be sure to rectify that sometime soon.
Thanks! Yeah a bunch of stuff here would be no-brainers for the site xD
Quote from: goldenscruff on March 06, 2025, 09:43:41 PMNice piece.
I don't hear any notes different to transcribed. I think there is a strings doubling the bottom note of the chord down an octave, but that seems silly to include.
The con pedale direction may lead performers to hold the pedal for 2 bars, whereas including some |______| then a simile would probably convey a more accurate pedaling technique.
Quote from: Whoppybones on March 08, 2025, 10:00:06 AMI also see nothing wrong with the notes. I see what goldenscruff is saying about the con pedale. I think either way works without too much detriment (for example, if I were to play this I'd probably hold the pedal for two bars anyways since I've gotta be hitting those RH overlap notes.) Looks like a great sheet though!
Yeah, it actually is my intent to have the user pedal for each pair of measures. I think if I were to put an explicit pedal break in between each pair of measures, it runs the risk of the performer making it sound too disconnected by adding an audible break.
Quote from: Bloop on March 10, 2025, 02:43:27 PMTaking a quick look now, notes all seem good! Some small things to consider:
-m10, 12, 14-16: Maybe you could put these measures in the G clef too, as they're technically part of the "high" piano part? They have a similar amount of ledger lines below the staff as they have above atm.
Alternatively, in these same measures, you could cross-staff the notes from beat 1.5 on to the R.H., as the R.H. is already in that range anyway and it helps seeing you don't necessarily need to hold the chords in those measures pressed
-Maybe not necessary, but you could add a courtesy accidental on m20 beat 3 in the R.H.
- Sounds good, I opted for a clef change rather than cross-staffing to parallel the previous section, and it's easy enough for the performer to decide to take notes with their RH.
- Yeah, courtesy natural there sounds good!
Files updated, thanks for the quick look everyone! :)
Awesome, I can accept!
This submission has been accepted by Bloop (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=1023).
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