Submission Information:
Series: Ace Attorney
Game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Recollection ~ DL-6
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Saava yu Adrin (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=8936)
For reference: https://youtu.be/V32y9gHJP0E
Also known as "Reminiscences", "Reminiscence", or "Reminiscing".
Welcome to NinSheetMusic, and congrats on submitting your first sheet! This looks pretty good, here's my feedback:
- The lower layer eighth rests in m. 5 and 7 should still be shown on beat 1
- m. 6 beat 3.5 is a C rather than Ab
- The Bb in the lower RH layer in m. 8 beat 4 sounds like a G instead. Sounds like there might be two G's in different octaves actually, but you can probably pick just one for the right hand to play
- I don't think the F is present in the first chord in m. 9
- The chords in m. 10 sound like (bottom to top) - Eb-C-Eb, D-Bb-D
- The beat 1 notes in the left hand in the last four measures could just be quarter notes like the rest of the piece, they don't sound especially shortened here
- I think beat 4 of measure 12 sounds more like this:
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- Don't forget to capitalize the N, S, and M in the site URL
Also, just confirming that you want your arranger name to be displayed as "Saava"?
Hi Latios, thanks for evaluating my sheet!
All of the changes ought to have been updated (I also changed all of the file names to match). I almost forgot to remove the F :o!
I would prefer to be listed as Saava, since most of the time that's how people refer to me online.