Wandering through your mind
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9LrAC8jr9Uk
Crap, I just realized, in the video I say I haven't named the song yet, but then I name it just before I post it. :-\
It's...boring.
You have something there, you just need to work with it more. Just my opinion, so take it for what it is.
Also, nobody ever comes to this side of the forum, so don't feel bad if you post something and get no replies.
it's only my 3rd composition, yeh im having trouble messing with the left hand, idk I just...
thanks for the feedback
I disagree with Maestro slightly. I thought it was perfectly fine, albeit a bit... ordinary. Not really boring, though. I enjoyed it much, and I think it's really great that you would post that up here at the risk of being ridiculed, winterkid.
Keep composing, and eventually your pieces will be flawless. :)
Aww, thanks slow, that gives me the motivation to try harder. I was thinking about posting some more pieces, or at least clips/ideas up, what do you think?
I was going for a type of cartoon style song there, kind of a mellow background inspiration piece, not really a song, originally i had a very light drum beat in the background and some trombone for more harmony, that's just one layer :)
See my post in Dr. Pamplemousse's Pokemon fanfic.
It's the same with writing as it is with music--you must first please yourself before even attempting to please others. That's my take on things, anyway. :)
And I was hoping for motivation there, because your TWG posts left me feeling like you really needed it.
Well I usually don't show anyone what I do, cause my friends dont care much, and yes, you gave me the motivation I needed :)
Hallucination (http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/9bcf4bfe83af4aab2ac9d5dff593bd482a79f688)
So here's the Sheet music, which should have the option to play like Finale does, I added quite a bit.
Slow, you should definitely check this out and learn it!
Sorry that there's no key signature, but this application is new to me...
Any thoughts? I'm going to be adding many more of my compositions through this format, MUCH more complex ones :)
I'll review it in a sec--to find the key signature, you just find the note the song "ends" on--for example, no sharps or flats should either signify that the key is in A minor (haunting song and ends on the note A) or C Major (Happy song ending on the note C).
:P
That's some pretty cool stuff. :D
Quote from: SlowPokemon on November 23, 2010, 05:50:09 AMI'll review it in a sec--to find the key signature, you just find the note the song "ends" on--for example, no sharps or flats should either signify that the key is in A minor (haunting song and ends on the note A) or C Major (Happy song ending on the note C).
:P
I know my music theory ;)
It's the application, it's got minimal features
Oh and thanks :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kIPBMWGk6c
Much better version of it.
Guess these aren't compositions, but I'm the only one who's played them. SO THEY'RE MINE.
Enjoy
Piano Improv #1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBD4kG3q2ZY) (Not worth watching)
Piano Improv #2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0l7QaUyP8D8) (Somewhat worth it)
Piano Improv #3 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=063_32R82rg) (Definitely want to watch this one!)
And!!!! If you haven't seen it.......... yet.
E17ROXX (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2T8CcYOk3Y) <CLICK
Wait was that was Qew?
Quote from: Qew on November 20, 2008, 11:59:36 PMawww wat?! WAAAHHH you guyz are soo old
I'm 6!!!
If so, that's an incredible voice for a 9-year-old.
What finale product program do you use?
Because, if it's new enough, you could just make an midi with all sorts of instruments.
(If you want, I can change any midi to mp3 {bought software})
But, not bad.... considering it could use a real forte, maestoso part in it.
Kinda like the second part in Fur Elise (fur example.... I mean, for example. :P)
I haven't been using Finale for much.
Auroric Plains (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63j2lJ5_CsU)
Scrambled Light (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q-iYiXHLDQE)
Ye Olde lament (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLm4tUm7g-g)
My newer compositions.