Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Glitzville
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/mus/662) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/mid/662) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetm.us/download/pdf/662)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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Original:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WwzOUUPctQg
Don't I remember you doing this one a long time ago
To start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.
The bottom note on what is currently the second 16th note of the bar is probably not needed. I'm pretty sure it's just echo from the first note.
Bars 8-16 needs significant reworking. There is just so much overlapping at the moment.
Remember that bars 33-40 are straight, not swung when you do the changes in my first dot point. Also, it'd be cool if you could include the little lead-in to bar 33 so that it doesn't quite sound like it comes out of nowhere.
From bar 49-56, I don't think octaves are really the best way of capturing the thickening of the texture. Experiment with something.
And don't forget our new URL.
Dang! I wont be able to get on a computer till tomorrow.
Thanks for the feedback!!!!! :)
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 28, 2015, 04:03:30 AMTo start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.
I was thinking you were crazy at first, then I really, REALLY read what you meant.
I would have to agree.
I would put the time signature at 2/2, just to keep the meter at 2. Just a suggestion.
Well, maybe I am just a little crazy.
I agree, 2/2 sounds like a good idea.
2/2 and double evry note?
16th to 8th, 8th to quarter etc.?
Yep.
Ok! I'll have it fixed later today! :)
How's Mushroom Gorge?
I haven't looked at it, I've been focusing on replacements.
Brassman? :P
I have a TON of replacements..... :)
The Banjo songs
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 28, 2015, 04:03:30 AMTo start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.
The bottom note on what is currently the second 16th note of the bar is probably not needed. I'm pretty sure it's just echo from the first note.
Bars 8-16 needs significant reworking. There is just so much overlapping at the moment.
Remember that bars 33-40 are straight, not swung when you do the changes in my first dot point. Also, it'd be cool if you could include the little lead-in to bar 33 so that it doesn't quite sound like it comes out of nowhere.
From bar 49-56, I don't think octaves are really the best way of capturing the thickening of the texture. Experiment with something.
And don't forget our new URL.
Fixed All!
Accepted? :)
Much, much better on this one.
As for Mushroom Gorge. I'll take a look at it.
The URL needs to follow the guidelines.
I didn't say that the bit near the end had to have no extras, just that the octave doubling wasn't the way to go. I'm sure you can incorporate the chords in there somewhere.
You can flip the stems on the first two beats of 32. And you missed the grace note just before beat one of 33.
The LH chords from bar 33 to bar 40 all need a C natural.
Somewhere around bar 55, there is a bar missing from the sheet that's in the original.
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 01:19:23 AMThe URL needs to follow the guidelines.
You can flip the stems on the first two beats of 32. And you missed the grace note just before beat one of 33.
The LH chords from bar 33 to bar 40 all need a C natural.
Somewhere around bar 55, there is a bar missing from the sheet that's in the original.
All fixed
Except this:
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 01:19:23 AMI didn't say that the bit near the end had to have no extras, just that the octave doubling wasn't the way to go. I'm sure you can incorporate the chords in there somewhere.
I originally put the octaves in for fun. Frankly, I dont know what else to put there. I dont hear any other voices.....
There are chords on beat 2 and 4 if I remember correctly.
So I have to incorporate them? I really dont think they're needed.....
Nvm
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 02:01:43 PMThere are chords on beat 2 and 4 if I remember correctly.
Fixed.
Got everything fixed, Deku.
Accepted? :)
Just bumping before it hits the second page.
CAN I GET THIS ONE ACCEPTED? EVERYTHING IS FIXED! :)
Quote from: mariolegofan on February 03, 2015, 04:22:29 PMJust bumping before it hits the second page.
CAN I GET THIS ONE ACCEPTED? EVERYTHING IS FIXED! :)
Not quite what I had in mind. The polyphony is still the most important thing going on through that section. I'll have a fiddle with it.
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on February 05, 2015, 03:43:05 AMNot quite what I had in mind. The polyphony is still the most important thing going on through that section. I'll have a fiddle with it.
ok.....
Nevermind, this'll do. I fixed up the chords.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/84117653/Assistance/Paper%20Mario%20TTYD%20-%20Glitzville.mus
Ok!
Accepted :)
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