Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Dragon Ball Z: Attack of the Saiyans
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Final Boss (vs. Vegeta)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LifeMushroom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4236)
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Sorry for the bump, but I want someone to see this before it slides down to the next page. :P
You could probably incorporate more of the actual bass line into the left hand. That would also add some variety too which is much needed. Try to spice it up a little bit, in general.
It needs measure numbers at the start of each line. And our new URL.
The A flat in bar 12 should be a G sharp.
There are some rhythm grouping issues starting around the 2nd to last line of the 2nd page.
And the layer work needs some tidying up. Colliding rest aren't good. And there are some playability issues when the second layer comes in too.
The last bar in the RH is missing a half note rest.
Fixed this. Wow Monolith Soft did this game, had no idea.
https://db.tt/BmBsWtPF
Good to go.
Nice job Don. I corrected some accidental spellings, re-distributed the measure layout, and revamped m. 37+.
[MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Final%20Boss%20-%20Vs.%20Vegeta.mus) [MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Final%20Boss%20-%20Vs.%20Vegeta.midi) [PDF] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Final%20Boss%20-%20Vs.%20Vegeta.pdf)
Thanks. I like what you did with 37+. :J
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