Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Paper Mario
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: The Tile Pool
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424)
Needs some reworking. Missing the intro, and there is never just one voice at any given time.
Don't just skip voices because they are hard to hear.
And you have overlapping accidentals and slurs/dynamics.
Not to mention the excessive ledger lines. Use 8va markings to fix that.
And listen and input the key changes. They are prominent.
I'm not 100% sure, but I think this may be plagiarism as well.
Take a look at this midi (http://www.vgmusic.com/file/41d84bf5072469efb2165be51feba5f5.html).
Quite a few lines look identical, as if they were copied directly out of the midi into a finale file.
Can I prove that Sammer did not come to the exact same notes and chords by chance? No. But finale does have a habit of overlapping accidentals when something is copy>pasted. This also explains the lack of an intro, as the midi does not have an intro that would copy/paste well onto piano.
Quote from: Maelstrom on February 22, 2015, 06:17:33 PMI'm not 100% sure, but I think this may be plagiarism as well.
Take a look at this midi (http://www.vgmusic.com/file/41d84bf5072469efb2165be51feba5f5.html).
Quite a few lines look identical, as if they were copied directly out of the midi into a finale file.
Can I prove that King did not come to the exact same notes and chords by chance? No. But finale does have a habit of overlapping accidentals when something is copy>pasted. This also explains the lack of an intro, as the midi does not have an intro that would copy/paste well onto piano.
No.
It somehow turned out the same as the midi.
That's why you think I'm plagiarizing!
And no, I did not steal Swoon.exe either. And I'm on my brother's computer, so I can't post Get Cooking on here right now.
Quote from: King on February 22, 2015, 06:24:12 PMNo.
It somehow turned out the same as the midi.
That's why you think I'm plagiarizing!
And no, I did not steal Swoon.exe either. And I'm on my brother's computer, so I can't post Get Cooking on here right now.
Reason?
I don't do intros for long songs
...why wouldn't you do intros, regardless of length? If it's part of the song, you should arrange it regardless.
You say you don't plagiarize? Prove it by arranging a beginning. Then we'll believe you.
EVERYTHING in the original is required including the intros.
And I'll be darn if this isn't part of a midi.....
And this:
Quote from: Latios212 on February 22, 2015, 07:01:14 PMYou say you don't plagiarize? Prove it by arranging a beginning. Then we'll believe you.
Quote from: Mario Lego Fan on February 22, 2015, 07:02:35 PMEVERYTHING in the original is required including the intros.
And I'll be darn if this isn't part of a midi.....
How about Bloop's Francis Battle (for example)? It's missing the intro.
Stop using Bloop as an excuse for justifying your inept arranging.
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1111.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fh475%2FBespinben%2Fbloop_zpsk2mul0dp.jpg&hash=aa0ef9ec454e111407c396056464b0b8085cbc74) (http://s1111.photobucket.com/user/Bespinben/media/bloop_zpsk2mul0dp.jpg.html)
Bloop HAS arranged Francis Battle, as a solo, WITH the intro (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=2141.msg242467#msg242467).
It's just not on-site yet.
And, by the way, the one on-site that you're citing to justify yourself was submitted in January 2012 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=4090.msg135172#msg135172).
Quality standards have improved since then.
tl;dr - Stop trying to drag us back to the dark ages.
Quote from: blueflower999 on February 22, 2015, 07:56:11 PMStop using Bloop as an excuse for justifying your inept arranging.
Exactly! Just because Bloop does not know what he is doing, does not mean you have to set your standards to his low level! Imagine everyone delivering sheets of Bloop's quality! What a horrible idea!
Spoiler
I <3 Bloop
Excuse me, but I will arrange it; as soon as I'm doing with Get Cooking.
I see that my name is on this one :P
I'll fix it for you.....
MLF I hope you realize that you're a saint for doing this lol
Or something worse by encouraging Sammer not to change.......
You really shouldn't be fixing all of his arrangements like this, y'know.
O brother. Let's just say this:
I'd rather get good arrangements on the site quickly (despite whos name is on it) rather then just telling him what is wrong and having him change it. That would take exponential time.
But this time (unlike last time) I will explain what is wrong with it in
accordance with re-arrangingfixing up the sheet myself.
Besides, I need to get my reputation back.....helping people unselfishly and having lovingkindness outta do the trick :P
I'll have it done tomorrow Sammer. You better be thankful ;)
Quote from: mariolegofan on February 23, 2015, 03:14:57 PMBesides, I need to get my reputation back.....
Not sure if helping a troll is gonna help you with this goal... But whatever...
Quote from: Xaoz on February 23, 2015, 04:18:33 PMNot sure if helping a troll is gonna help you with this goal... But whatever...
I'm not just helping him.
I'll help anyone who asks!
This is on the back burner for me.
I might have it done sometime this week.
I wanna do some replacements right now.
Now that Sammer is banned. I'll be changing this to my name ONLY
Ah yes, nothing like crediting yourself with your own work :)
Yeah ;)
EDIT: So there is no confusion for the Updaters, the files in the OP are NOT fixed. So, don't bother giving feedback on them 'till I get the brand new version up. I'm shootin' for sometime tomorrow to have that finished.
Ok!
Started from scratch with this one and the final product is in the OP! I worked a long time on this one and I think it's ready to go. Any feedback?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v4cmZWS8Hb8
Much better. I'd recommend some 8vbs though. There are a few to many ledger lines in places.
Nice job! Correct me if I'm wrong but should the note beaming be changed to reflect the 3 beats in measures 14 and similar measures? Also fix the title on the second page.
^He's right, you know.
Quote from: Latios212 on February 27, 2015, 10:46:08 AMNice job! Correct me if I'm wrong but should the note beaming be changed to reflect the 3 beats in measures 14 and similar measures? Also fix the title on the second page.
Ok.....I'll get that stuff.
Quote from: Maelstrom on February 27, 2015, 10:41:04 AMMuch better. I'd recommend some 8vbs though. There are a few to many ledger lines in places.
F isn't that low is it?
I belive Oli said a good limit is 3. You've got 4 in places. It just makes it easier to read.
And an 8va in 5-8 would be nice too.
edit: And as a general rule, (by me) if you have a few measures without anything above that G line, an 8va should be implemented.
Quote from: Maelstrom on February 27, 2015, 11:31:06 AMI belive Oli said a good limit is 3. You've got 4 in places. It just makes it easier to read.
And an 8va in 5-8 would be nice too.
edit: And as a general rule, (by me) if you have a few measures without anything above that G line, an 8va should be implemented.
Ok! I'll get it!
ALL fixed!
Quote from: Maelstrom on February 27, 2015, 11:31:06 AMAnd an 8va in 5-8 would be nice too.
And it's not always clear where the 8bv line belongs. Sometimes it is just way too close to the treble clef.
I see.
Also got the File Info. fixed on this one.