Submission Information:
Series: Professor Layton
Game: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Down the Tubes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=1023)
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monthly reminder
so yeah
Excellent work!
A few things
Measure 17: You have articulation clashing with stuff
- Everywhere you have 2 sixteenth triplets in a row, I would change it to sextuplets like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ex-tempore.org%2Fmather1%2Fsextup.gif&hash=c3650dc06acee24c3df90b0a74504a1f3597d43f)
It'd make it cleaner. I try to use them everywhere I can.
That is the only stuff I see. Excellent work! :)
Changed the sextuplets, and fixed the articulation! I also removed the second voice playing in m. 17-24, as it's just a burden to play and too distracting for the main melody imo. Also did a few enharmonic fixes
At the very bottom of the second page there's a "6". To remove that one, create a pdf file by printing the pdf file instead of exporting, I've encountered the same problem. If that, for some reason, doesn't solve it, use this website (https://dochub.com/) to create a new pdf and white out the "6".
Dynamic ideas: measures 4-5 maybe put a "p/mp" since those are only accompaniment notes, but a "mf" measure 5 when the melody starts. Later measure 13-16, I think it would be befitting to have it in piano/mezzopiano "p/mp".
but the exporting pdf has never failed me that much before
will fix that asap
EDIT: Done!
yeah
Guys are you gonna look over this song already? XD
APRIL
Odd.....I wonder why yours are always left in the dust.....
Quote from: mariolegofan on August 19, 2015, 02:17:27 PMOdd.....I wonder why yours are always left in the dust.....
Because they're so good, no one can find anything wrong with them.
I call it JDMEK5 syndrome
The problems of being an awesome musician[/ego]
I agree
That awkward moment when TG gets accepted (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7405.0) before you...
True, but his is 2 measures :p
Quote from: mariolegofan on August 19, 2015, 04:33:57 PMTrue, but his is 2 measures :p
Haha, and we did about 50% of the work XD. Then again, she has Notepad, so we kind of had to.
Sorry for the delay, we try to go through the subs as fast as possible. It's ready to go now.
This submission has been accepted by DonValentino (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=1068).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot