Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Mike Tyson's Punch-Out!!
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Fight Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: G-Man (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4583)
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Overall, I'd say that this is really good! I do have some suggestions though:
1) The submitted name is "Fight Theme," but the name on the sheet is "Main Theme/Fight Theme." I would put
Main Theme below "Fight Theme" and above
Mike Tyson's Punch-Out!! in size 12 font.
2) (Being really nit-picky here, sorry) you're missing an ! in the Punch-Out!! in the sheets. Sorry. Had to point that out. :P
3) url should be http://www.NinSheetMusic.org
But yeah, overall a really good arrangement!
Haha sorry about those mistakes! They were rather small, but I'm glad you pointed them out, as the definitely would've bothered me had I noticed. Thank you for the reference as well. This is my first submission and first time on the forums, so I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :D
No problem! And welcome! You have a good ear for arranging, and I hope that we see more in the future! ;D
One minor detail: In measures 1 & 3, you have an eighth note followed by a half rest. Typically, you want to separate the first two beats and the last two measures of a beat to make it easier to read. So it should look like: 8thnote-8threst-quarterrest-8threst, followed by your 3 eighth notes.
Otherwise, good arrangement!
[MIDI] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Punch-Out%21%21%20-%20Fight%20Theme.mid) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Punch-Out%21%21%20-%20Fight%20Theme.mus) [PDF] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Punch-Out%21%21%20-%20Fight%20Theme.pdf) [MUSX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/Punch-Out%21%21%20-%20Fight%20Theme.musx)
The arrangement was good, but had a few wrong notes in the bass and harmony. I fixed these.
(For some reason, I still can't edit or delete out the old MUSX file :/)Quote from: Brawler4Ever on June 03, 2015, 11:27:05 PM1) The submitted name is "Fight Theme," but the name on the sheet is "Main Theme/Fight Theme." I would put Main Theme below "Fight Theme" and above Mike Tyson's Punch-Out!! in size 12 font.
Uhhh..... sorry, but this is a no-no. Just Game only in the sub-title. Besides, there is really no official indication this is the "main theme" of the game.
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=2510).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot