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Title: Comments on "A story a la ze Fallout universe"
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 25, 2015, 11:12:14 PM
inb4 someone points out that gunpowder is hard to mix-
http://www.wikihow.com/Make-Gunpowder
Anyways, how bad do I suck?
Title: Re: Comments on "A story a la ze Fallout universe"
Post by: mikey on August 25, 2015, 11:21:10 PM
yes
Title: Re: Comments on "A story a la ze Fallout universe"
Post by: ThatGamer on August 26, 2015, 07:28:11 AM
Quote from: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 25, 2015, 11:12:14 PMAnyways, how bad do I suck?

Not too much. You could use some tips from Maya or Mario Pianist, though...
Title: Re: Comments on "A story a la ze Fallout universe"
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 26, 2015, 09:19:43 AM
Just for the record, the prologue was more of a background information thing (which is why I said you don't have to read it in the thing).
I might talk to them though. This is more of just a random little side thing than anything else, so I probably won't be super frequent. We'll see though.
Title: Re: Comments on "A story a la ze Fallout universe"
Post by: TheMarioPianist on August 26, 2015, 09:53:03 AM
Quote from: Pianist Da Sootopolis on August 26, 2015, 09:19:43 AMJust for the record, the prologue was more of a background information thing (which is why I said you don't have to read it in the thing).
I might talk to them though. This is more of just a random little side thing than anything else, so I probably won't be super frequent. We'll see though.

At first glance, I think it looks pretty good! I only had the time to skim it; I'm at school right now... :P. But I will definitely read it more closely when I get home and give you some better feedback. Look forward to it! :)