Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Anticipation
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: joeberryosponge (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4705)
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXqC3GpWxSs
For future reference, you should follow up with a post containing the video of your song.
Otherwise, I think this arrangement's looking pretty good so far. We'll have to wait and see what the more senior staff have to say about it.
Sounds pretty good to me
Your formatting needs a bit of work: http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0
Watch for the text sizes and whether it's bold/italicized in the header.
In the last system (m.32-33), the notes are far too spread out. This is because you have only 2 measures in that system, a problem that can fixed if you simply assign each system to have 4 measure each. Notice how your current sheet has m. 18-22 (5 measures) in a single system, as well as m. 23-27? This is the source of the problem.
EDIT: This is a really good arrangement (nice job esp. w/ the articulation), so I decided to fix this minor issue in lieu of your approval since it seems you disappeared.
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=2510).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot