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Title: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on September 20, 2015, 04:49:03 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari)
Console: PC
Title: Cemetery
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83)

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Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on September 20, 2015, 04:49:51 PM

Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Bespinben on September 20, 2015, 07:17:06 PM
I'm sure you have a reason, but why did you not use a compound time signature? I don't see any straight rhythms anywhere to warrant 4/4 over 12/8.

(There's kind of a swing feel almost, if you'd rather take that route instead...)
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on September 20, 2015, 07:48:36 PM
that's what I was thinking as well
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on September 20, 2015, 07:56:30 PM
No reason in particular, that's just how I feel this piece should look. It has that 4/4 weight distribution of 1>3>4>2 going on that is unique to that time signature. I also find it easier to read the syncopation in measures like mm 8. Though, it definitely shouldn't be in swing, I believe.

OH NO MY TEMPO MARKING-WHERE'D IT GOOOOO
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on September 28, 2015, 08:51:56 AM
Re-uploaded the files with the missing tempo marking and re-spaced the systems.
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: DonValentino on September 28, 2015, 10:06:30 AM
E minor?
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: FireArrow on September 28, 2015, 03:25:07 PM
Quote from: DonValentino on September 28, 2015, 10:06:30 AME minor?

It switches between E minor and D minor every 2 measures then settles in C major (I think?) for the rest. Since the chords E minor, D minor, and C major are all in the C major scale, C major would make the most sense if you were to use a single key signature (I think?)

;3
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on September 28, 2015, 05:11:15 PM
I intentionally put no key signature. Do you guys think it should be otherwise?
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: FireArrow on September 28, 2015, 05:50:21 PM
I'm no updater, but putting it in E minor/D minor wouldn't result in any less amount of accidentals or make it easier to read. The only "better" option I can think of would be to notate each key signature individually, which is arbitrary and obnoxious.

edit: I suppose you could put m1-12 in E minor and 13-20 in C major?
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Bespinben on September 28, 2015, 06:24:03 PM
Just wanted to point out the Sebastion Wolff's arrangement of this is in E minor (and, consequently, spells the Ab as G#).

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Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on September 28, 2015, 09:24:42 PM
ECH that arrangement is awful. Anyway, after reevaluating it, I think it is fine without a key signature. Its a short enough piece that I don't think it matters, and a key change would be overkill, I feel (not to mention that it doesn't even harmonically function in E minor). And Ben, that Ab is the lowered fifth in the D half-diminished 7 chord, so I don't see the sense in making it a G#.
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: DonValentino on September 29, 2015, 02:10:45 AM
Eh, fine then. I that case, I'll accept it~~
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Cemetery" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on September 29, 2015, 02:11:10 AM
This submission has been accepted by DonValentino (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=1068).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot