Submission Information:
Series: Animal Crossing
Game: Animal Crossing: Happy Home Designer
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Interior Designing
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Dude (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=10)
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKIqzCJbSg4
OMG NO WAY i luv this one! I'll check it out later once I get to a computer, but one thing I notice is that you're missing the backslash at the end of the site url.
Btw I arranged the other one in like a half an hour
(Although formatting it into finale took a bit longer lol)
submitting it now
also edited the / into this even though that's really unnecessary lol
Yeah, but rules is rules :/
Looking forward to listening to these in a few hours!
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 08:42:43 AMLooking forward to listening to these in a few hours!
This one especially sounds amazing! (Haven't listened to the other yet) I was helping him get this from midi to mus with proper formatting, and my perfect pitch ears didn't notice any discrepancies. I'll leave that up to you though; I think this should go pretty quick!
Awesome, Dude did a thing!
Probably should include some slurs when applicable, like in the first eighth notes in measures 3 and 7, and in other places.
Sweet Job!
- I'd recommend putting slurs on those notes in measures 3, 6, 18, 19, 20, 22, 23, 24, 27, & 29 to make it feel more legato.
- In Measure 22, those are tuplets, not dotted 8th - 16ths.
I'll give more detailed feedback later. I didn't check notes or accidentals yet.
Great work!
Quote from: mariolegofan on October 02, 2015, 10:35:52 AM- I'd recommend putting slurs on those notes in measures 3, 6, 18, 19, 20, 22, 23, 24, 27, & 29 to make it feel more legato.
- In Measure 22, those are triplets, not dotted 8th - 16ths.
I agree with both of these comments, however the slurs are up to you. In addition to these things, here are the remaining things that need tweaking:
-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.
-The G# in measure 21 should be an Ab.
-The A# in measure 25 should be a Bb.
-Both C naturals in measure 28 should be B#'s.
-The D# in measure 29 should be an Eb.
-The A# in measure 30 should be a Bb.
-I would suggest removing the staccato markings from the quarter notes on beats two and three of measure 26. Those two notes should be played the same as the third, and all three should be the same as the notes that follow in measure 28.
Make these changes and you'll be good! I love it!
I'm starting to regret submitting these.
._.
If you would like, I can make the changes for you.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 11:54:52 AM-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.
-The G# in measure 21 should be an Ab.
-The A# in measure 25 should be a Bb.
-Both C naturals in measure 28 should be B#'s.
-The D# in measure 29 should be an Eb.
-The A# in measure 30 should be a Bb.
Looks like Olimar got to the accidentals before me :P
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 11:54:52 AMhowever the slurs are up to you.
I agree. That's why I put recommended, but I highly recommend them. They'd really make the piece! :p
Edit: I was about to say the same thing lol
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 12:12:12 PMIf you would like, I can make the changes for you.
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 12:12:12 PMIf you would like, I can make the changes for you.
ok please do
Also MLF, can you like... not post in my threads?
I can do it, Olimar.
Please don't.
*snip*
And I'm not submitting it
Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> MLF if you fix my sheet I'm not submitting it
Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> I don't want your help
Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> Leave me alone
?
Why? I did this only:
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 11:54:52 AMI agree with both of these comments, however the slurs are up to you. In addition to these things, here are the remaining things that need tweaking:
-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.
-The G# in measure 21 should be an Ab.
-The A# in measure 25 should be a Bb.
-Both C naturals in measure 28 should be B#'s.
-The D# in measure 29 should be an Eb.
-The A# in measure 30 should be a Bb.
-I would suggest removing the staccato markings from the quarter notes on beats two and three of measure 26. Those two notes should be played the same as the third, and all three should be the same as the notes that follow in measure 28.
Make these changes and you'll be good! I love it!
What don't you get by
Quote from: Dude on October 02, 2015, 12:31:26 PMAlso MLF, can you like... not post in my threads?
Also please remove it from your post.
Fine. All you have to do is tell me.
I'll do it myself when I get home.
@mlf:
Quote from: Olimar12345 on August 07, 2015, 09:41:27 AMI have told you this several times privately in the past, please just let the updaters do their jobs.
That said, I look forward to seeing this one finished, Dude!
updated and here's an rendered mp3 with a vst i have if anyone wants it :3
http://www.mediafire.com/listen/v0b1mnw1822b9x2/Interior_Designing.mp3
It's beautiful! One last thing, though: the C naturals in measure 29 were correct, but you made them B#'s D: revert them back and we'll be set!
Edit: also, about this:
Quote from: Olimar12345 on October 02, 2015, 11:54:52 AM-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.
Don't forget the quarter rest! And go ahead and do this to the left hand too.
updated and uploaded
also, any chance for some feedback on my other one?
Good work!
This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83).
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