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Title: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Zeta on December 29, 2015, 06:06:36 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Shop
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ShadowChords (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4669)

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Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: mastersuperfan on December 29, 2015, 06:59:25 PM
*aheeeeeem* (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0)

Also, 6/8 goes by dotted quarter, not quarter.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: braix on December 29, 2015, 07:02:05 PM
link a youtube video to the original song
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 29, 2015, 07:44:15 PM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 28, 2015, 09:06:26 PMArchiving this submission. Please review the [Formatting Guidelines.] (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0) You may resubmit this once your arrangement is up to par.

will archive later though
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: WandringMinstrel on December 30, 2015, 07:48:52 AM
Watch your accidentals; usually doesn't make sense to write A# in one hand and Bb in the other (as in m. 8). In m. 10, I think G# would be preferable to Ab, since it implies a leading tone to the A in the next measure's F chord.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: mastersuperfan on December 30, 2015, 08:04:16 AM
Quote from: WandringMinstrel on December 30, 2015, 07:48:52 AMWatch your accidentals; usually doesn't make sense to write A# in one hand and Bb in the other (as in m. 8). In m. 10, I think G# would be preferable to Ab, since it implies a leading tone to the A in the next measure's F chord.

> (as in m. 8)

rekt
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: WandringMinstrel on December 30, 2015, 01:26:26 PM
Gorram emojis, that should be an 8.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: ShadowChords on December 30, 2015, 11:46:08 PM
Quote from: mastersuperfan on December 29, 2015, 06:59:25 PM*aheeeeeem* (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0)

Also, 6/8 goes by dotted quarter, not quarter.

*cough* (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7968.0)

And I fixed the tempo marking and accidentals. Here's an updated pdf: https://www.dropbox.com/s/qvmw5np5plpqhf6/final_Fantasy_1_Shop_Theme_.pdf?dl=0
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Bespinben on December 31, 2015, 06:43:45 PM
This one's on the house. Happy New Year's.

[MID] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.mid) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.mus) [PDF] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.pdf) [MUSX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.musx)

(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop-page-001.jpg)
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 31, 2015, 06:54:37 PM
Unecessary forward repeat bar at the beginning.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: mastersuperfan on December 31, 2015, 07:14:52 PM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on December 31, 2015, 06:54:37 PMUnecessary forward repeat bar at the beginning.

Looks like I'm not the only one bothered by how commonly accepted these are.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 31, 2015, 08:07:01 PM
They've been popping up quite a lot lately...
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Bespinben on January 01, 2016, 02:13:41 AM
"Thanks Bespinben for fixing those missing notes, note durations, layer usage, articulations, enharmonic spellings, and formatting! I did though notice a repeat bar at the beginning that should be taken out, which I guess you just forgot with all the other stuff that ya did. Cheers!"

Oh! My bad. Good eye Olimar, much appreciated  ;D
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: ShadowChords on January 01, 2016, 08:51:22 PM
Quote from: Bespinben on December 31, 2015, 06:43:45 PMThis one's on the house. Happy New Year's.

[MID] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.mid) [MUS] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.mus) [PDF] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.pdf) [MUSX] (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop.musx)

(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/FF%20-%20Shop-page-001.jpg)

And a Happy New Year to you too. Thanks.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Pianist Da Sootopolis on January 01, 2016, 08:55:22 PM
Quote from: Bespinben on January 01, 2016, 02:13:41 AM"Thanks Bespinben for fixing those missing notes, note durations, layer usage, articulations, enharmonic spellings, and formatting! I did though notice a repeat bar at the beginning that should be taken out, which I guess you just forgot with all the other stuff that ya did. Cheers!"

Oh! My bad. Good eye Olimar, much appreciated  ;D
Bespinben why can't you be sassy more often
wait
is it because of your grammar?

Quote from: Bespinben on December 31, 2015, 06:43:45 PMHappy New Year's.
Title: Re: [NES] Final Fantasy - "Shop" by ShadowChords
Post by: Zeta on January 02, 2016, 06:14:32 PM
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=2510).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot