Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario 3D World
Console: Wii U
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UI1jOSzCxnM
Musescore does weird things. All of your text is sized at 83 percent, while the music is at 100...
Aside from that, your note lengths don't always seem to match the original, yours tend to be on the long-side. Also, those E's in the last four measures might fair better down an octave. Also you're missing measure numbers (Can't believe I didn't add those in when I had the file last! >.< )
Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 01, 2016, 04:53:36 PMMusescore does weird things. All of your text is sized at 83 percent, while the music is at 100...
Yeah, I have no idea how to fix that...
Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 01, 2016, 04:53:36 PMAside from that, your note lengths don't always seem to match the original, yours tend to be on the long-side. Also, those E's in the last four measures might fair better down an octave. Also you're missing measure numbers (Can't believe I didn't add those in when I had the file last! >.< )
Lowered the E's, shortened some longer notes, and added a few embellishments. :)
Links have obviously been updated
Here, this (https://www.dropbox.com/s/b1rdgm5voy7spbt/Title%20Screen.mus?dl=1) should make the text size look better! Also fit it on one page! Lastly, changed the measure distribution so that the 2 measure system is at the beginning. That makes sense since that is a two measure intro.
Quote from: TheMarioPianist on January 01, 2016, 06:07:25 PMHere, this (https://www.dropbox.com/s/b1rdgm5voy7spbt/Title%20Screen.mus?dl=1) should make the text size look better! Also fit it on one page! Lastly, changed the measure distribution so that the 2 measure system is at the beginning. That makes sense since that is a two measure intro.
Thanks! Links have been updated
Christ, quarter note = 208? That's faster than Flight of the Bumblebee. Hell, I don't think my metronome can even go that high.
Perhaps notate the thing with half note=104, and count it in two? Just a thought.
^thats not too uncommon to see in the Jazz & big band world. Either way will suffice.
Couple more things:
-the US released album titles this track "Title Screen," so switch it over to that.
-the marcatos in this style mean a different thing than they normally do, and don't quite make sense in the way you have them. Rewrite them:
--m.2 RH beat 1 - make it an accent instead
--m.10 RH beat 1 - make a staccato, and beat 2.5 make an accent
--m.18 do the same as m.10
Looking good almost done!
Quote from: Olimar12345 on January 02, 2016, 10:27:26 PMCouple more things:
-the US released album titles this track "Title Screen," so switch it over to that.
-the marcatos in this style mean a different thing than they normally do, and don't quite make sense in the way you have them. Rewrite them:
--m.2 RH beat 1 - make it an accent instead
--m.10 RH beat 1 - make a staccato, and beat 2.5 make an accent
--m.18 do the same as m.10
Links have been updated with these changes.
This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot