Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Let's-a-go!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: EvermoreCR (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4819)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/1613) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/1613) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/1613)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
I need to put a YT link?
Is obligatory?
It makes it easier for people to leave feedback on it....
Hmm.. I did the arrangement only 20 min ago, I don't know if I can put a YT link very soon...
I may be able to get it for you... It's not that hard
Really?... You would so good to do that? I mean, I am a pianist I can do it to.. but I don't have YT channel for doing this types of things and.. you know, is my very first time doing arrangements.
If you like you can check the score out and tell me if you like it.
You dont make the video on your own arrangement...you link the video with the original song.
Ahhhh!!.. Ok Here it is so...
You have a very solid arrangement! I noticed there is distinct lack of layers in your notation, however. See the little 1,2,3,4 buttons at the bottom-left corner of Finale? Those will allow you to write rhythmically independent parts within the same staff.
I also urge you to read the Formatting Guidelines (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0). This helps maintain uniformity among our thousands of sheets.
Ok, Thank You very much! I will do correct those things quickly and post it again!
Ready.. Like this you mean?
Not exactly. These buttons are the ones you're looking for:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1147.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo555%2FJDMEK5%2FCapture_10.png&hash=89900ed46cbefb1616af26cf4eb1f40dd3777e29)
Instead of using ties, write the melody line alone, then go down and hit the number "2" button, and proceed to write the harmony line alone. You'll see what we're talking about when you try it. Essentially, those buttons will let you do stuff like this:
(https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1147.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fo555%2FJDMEK5%2FCapture%2520b.png&hash=97aa9cd782835140e1224cfe2b5afe30caf6f621)
Also, in measure 51 (as seen in the pic), I changed your D flat to a C sharp. Be sure to fix that in your copy as well.
I see what you mean.. is to separate the harmony in right hand form the melody, and put the melody on layers two (that weird red notes xD). ...So thanks for explain. I will try. But I have a question... What type of ties you mean... the expression ones or the one who unify the note's duration with it's neighbor?. I mean, the expression ones are necessary.
Quote from: EvermoreCR on January 07, 2016, 10:29:51 AMI don't see the picture you sent to me....
Yeah sorry I had some technical difficulties. It's all up now though as well as a demonstration.
Quote from: EvermoreCR on January 07, 2016, 10:29:51 AMI think you mean to separate the harmony in right hand form the melody, and put the melody on layers two (that weird red notes xD).
Use layer two (the red notes) for the lower pitches. Use the first layer for the melody.
Ready, I won't reply again. Admins please watch this and decide.
The only problem I saw with it was that the "N", "S", and "M" in the website url needs to be capitolized, like this "NinSheetMusic.org"
Actual name of the track is "Oki Doki!!" according to the album Yoko Shimomura and Nintendo put out. So change that. Also, the intro, the second beat of each phrase should go to the G ABOVE the C, not below. Also not quite sure if your articulation is the best possible.
Ok I will change that thanks ;), Is my first time doing this kind of stuff, So, mistakes are sure to happen. I apology for that, I'll correct those things you said to me. And SlowPokemon, If the actual name of the track is "Oki Doki!!", Why do the people of the community summon the piece to the page with a wrong name? I only put the name that was there, I didn't know that that wasn't the actual name. And, I listen that in the intro, the note in the second pulse goes down not upwards, is a mistake that the previous arranger did.
I did the name change. But, I need the if the people wants to put this on the page, change the of the track form ''Let's a go'' to ''Oki Doki!!''.
Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 09, 2016, 10:37:15 AMActual name of the track is "Oki Doki!!" according to the album Yoko Shimomura and Nintendo put out.
Got a link?
- The pedal at the beginning is not needed at all.
- The first part is in C maj too.
- Formatting is a little wonky: Center the title and subtitle (which should be reduced in size so it matches the composer/arranger size) and put them closer together, center the copyright too. Also align the composer and arranger to the right, as well as using bold for the composer. Center the dynamics, and maybe resize everything to 90%. Last but not least, please remove the last blank measure.
- Please notate the metronome markings properly with a = between the note and the number.
Gj!
Deleted for way too much inactivity.