Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Galaxy
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: The Girl's Sadness
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424)
Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/604) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/604) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/604)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19FUWYoUAVk
Just some layer fixing and revised indication of the echoed melody in the first part. Finished product:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93589150/Super%20Mario%20Galaxy%20-%20The%20Girl%27s%20SadnessJD5.mus
Looks good! I do like having the dynamics in, but I'll deal with it :P
Curious, why did you get rid of the layers in 5 & 6?
In measure 5, you already have the LH playing the D, and for consistency in measure 6 since you have the F playing in layer 1 in measure 5. Since this piece uses pedal freely, it's not as important to show exactly the duration of each note, and keeping everything in one layer maintains a cleaner look.
Nice work!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot