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Title: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Zeta on November 13, 2016, 10:22:14 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Forest
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: FireArrow (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3340)

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Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on November 13, 2016, 10:23:08 PM
this is a very important addition to the site


at 13:18
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Maelstrom on December 11, 2016, 01:52:56 PM
Have you considered adding some slurs and/or more staccatos to this piece to spice it up?
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on December 11, 2016, 07:12:01 PM
Not really. Are there parts that you think need it?
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Maelstrom on January 01, 2017, 02:33:01 PM
Oops. It's fine if you don't want them.

2 quick formatting things:
Maybe stick another measure on the 1st page? You've got a lot of space at the bottom.
The text is in 10pt, not 12pt as it should be. Except for the title, of course.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on January 01, 2017, 10:11:35 PM
Quote from: Maelstrom on January 01, 2017, 02:33:01 PMMaybe stick another measure on the 1st page? You've got a lot of space at the bottom.

I'm not actually sure how to do this, althought I agree the large white space is bothering me too.

QuoteThe text is in 10pt, not 12pt as it should be. Except for the title, of course.

Fixed. I'll change it for this sheet, but I've done this for all my arrangements in the past (come on it looks way better :3) and no ones ever called me out on it.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: The Deku Trombonist on January 02, 2017, 12:07:42 AM
Just a thought... (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/84117653/Assistance/Tenchi%20o%20Kurau%20II%20-%20Forest.mus)
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on January 02, 2017, 12:52:03 AM
Wtf that's really nice how'd you do that... I really need to learn how to use finale.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: The Deku Trombonist on January 02, 2017, 04:33:57 AM
There's always a bit of tweaking needed here and there but I do have a template that I use (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/84117653/Template%202.1.ftmx) which takes care of some things.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on January 02, 2017, 01:50:02 PM
How do you use a .ftmx file?
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: The Deku Trombonist on January 02, 2017, 03:31:53 PM
Oh, that's a 2014 template file. I'll upload something for 2012 next time I'm on the computer.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: The Deku Trombonist on January 03, 2017, 05:39:59 AM
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/84117653/Template%202.1.mus

2014 can't make older template files so it's just a blank file.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on January 04, 2017, 01:20:06 PM
Saving that to my computer, many thanks.
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Latios212 on January 07, 2017, 06:34:27 PM
- High A# in 3 is a half note. Unless you shortened it to make the 16ths easier to play?
- M. 17 beat 2.75 hearing a B# instead of C#.
- is it okay to have E# against En like that in 14?

also what game is this
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: FireArrow on January 08, 2017, 11:17:28 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on January 07, 2017, 06:34:27 PM- High A# in 3 is a half note. Unless you shortened it to make the 16ths easier to play?

Yup

Quote- M. 17 beat 2.75 hearing a B# instead of C#.

Yeah you're right.

Quote- is it okay to have E# against En like that in 14?

Uh probably not. I'm gonna change the E natural to a D double sharp to makes a tritone.

Quotealso what game is this

our next arrangement project
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Maelstrom on January 09, 2017, 07:29:06 PM
Quote from: FireArrow on January 08, 2017, 11:17:28 AMour next arrangement project
all hail
Title: Re: [NES] Tenchi o Kurau II: Shokatsu Koumei Den - "Forest" by FireArrow
Post by: Zeta on January 09, 2017, 07:29:10 PM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot