i don't really like to complain, but something has to be done about this.
the origional metroid title theme's bass line gets off really bad from measure 18-41(no offense 2 whose it is)and theres a measure missing between 37 and 38! how this was overlooked and submitted is beyond me...
http://www.ninsheetmusic.net/sheetmusic.php?franchise=Metroid
i've been working on this for a while and this shows how it's supose to sound
http://www.mediafire.com/?mm051m4tg33 (http://www.mediafire.com/?mm051m4tg33)
as a big metroid fan, i couldnt just let this go-something needs to be done about this
Dude...that just got uploaded.
No offense, but checking out submissions more might have prevented this.
what really blows me away is the entire measure missing between 37 and 38! how do you overlook something that drastic?!?
the bass sounds perfectly fine to me... and i have the game for VC... i'm checking the missing measures now...
edit: ok i listened to your version and there's a couple things wroung with yours... first of all the base in the beginnig is real off.. it's suppose to be like a bell note... and the extra note in the chord really doesn't help much... the quarter note at the end and the 8th rest doens't fit at all... i don't much care for the 8va in the treble part... it doesn't sound bad or anything... base in the 2nd part sounds a little wierd... just for the first couple of measures... alright i'll admit... i do kinda like your treble switch after the 4 note up thing... and then at the end you'll know that it plays 8 times I.E. 4 times and a repeat... 2 times and that wierd hold at the end doesn't sound like teh actual song... u can submit it but to me there's not much difference except the few measures of 2 treble cleffs... oh and the 8th notes at measure 31 don't really fit in... it sounds like a quarter pickup instead of 2 8ths...
i'm not talking about the beginning, and i wasn't really planning to submit this song anyway-its 17 through 42 i wanted to fix on yours. here, listen to this- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pp96K7733qw
at around 0:44 is what im talking about-if u listen closely, u should be able to make out 3 separate parts. theres the high quarter notes, the sustaning whole notes, and the moving part-which sounds weird on yours.
hm.... i think i'll just submit a revision of my own song... there's a part u didn't metion in the last part which in my song is just doubling the treble... i couldn't here the thing that u were talking about... treble,bass... and drums were all i heard... if u don't mind i'd rather do what u did and make the bass treble and then fix the ending with some of my own work..
P.S. how did u make those red notes? i have finale printmusic demo right now...
to make diferent color notes, go to the bottom left-hand corner-u should see little boxed numbers 1234
1=black(regular)
2=red
3=green
4=blue-but no one ever needs a 4th one...
plus, ure free to use my title theme arrangement to help :)
Quote from: olimar12345 on July 17, 2008, 08:01:06 AMto make diferent color notes, go to the bottom left-hand corner-u should see little boxed numbers 1234
1=black(regular)
2=red
3=green
4=blue-but no one ever needs a 4th one...
plus, ure free to use my title theme arrangement to help :)
Actually. A 4th layer is used a lot in orchestral scores and vocal scores. Not a lot in piano though. You occasionally see it in a fugue or something, but other than that, not a lot.