Submission Information:
Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy IV
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Fanfare
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Dakook (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5194)
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Whoa, that was fast.
Here, Dakook, I fixed a couple things, which include your tempo marking and 8vb. Is this (https://www.dropbox.com/s/8r22mn8mln73k2k/Victory%20Fanfare.musx?dl=1) correct?
Bump for arranger
Yes, this is correct. Thank you!
Good. Now, all you have to do is update your files through the NSM Panel. Use the one I provided for you.
Okay, I have updated the files. :)
Was I supposed to have posted the original...? Or is there some other reason you posted that here?
That's why
Nice. just a couple of things:
- Needs an opening dynamic.
- The pickup measure sounds like it should only be one voice instead of being octave doubled. This would also make it immensely easier to play.
These errors need to be addressed:
-You've left out the bass voice and instead have doubled the tenor. It is entirely possible to have both.
-Please do not use the transposing octave clefs in piano music, use and 8vb or ledger lines.
-The rhythm on the down beat one in measure 2 should be a triplet in both hands, not a dotted eighth-sixteenth.
-A courtesy natural sign would be helpful on that first E in measure 2.
-The use of the staccato with the tenuto mark seems like overkill, especially since in most cases it is used while the opposite hand is using a regular staccato. I would suggest just using staccato.
Other than that, it's good. Below are the changes I mentioned in an updated version:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/wngucuv4r294y5x/Victory%20Fanfare12345.mus?dl=1
Small nitpick - the official title for this song is (https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/final-fantasy-iv-original-soundtrack/61052896) "Fanfare".
Dakook has granted permission to edit the files, so we're good here!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot