Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite!
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Bolero
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3843)
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Short and sweet. Nice arrangement!
Notes look good. I just have a few things:
- The game title is slightly off alignment.
- The mf is a little high. Go ahead and center it.
- The same voice that has the E in the left hand (that you incorporated) also has a D that shows up various places throughout the song. I believe you left it out because it's too big of a reach since it plays on the same beat as the low G in the left hand. Correct me if I'm wrong. Just thought I'd mention that.
That's all I have for this one.
Quote from: Sebastian on February 12, 2018, 07:50:40 PM- The same voice that has the E in the left hand (that you incorporated) also has a D that shows up various places throughout the song. I believe you left it out because it's too big of a reach since it plays on the same beat as the low G in the left hand. Correct me if I'm wrong. Just thought I'd mention that.
Correct. I think I had briefly toyed with the idea of taking it down an octave but decided not to for... reasons. I don't know, this arrangement is like two years old lmao. I think it just negatively affected the texture imo.
Rest is fixed.
Looks good, but could we put all of the left hand staccatos above the noteheads in places where they're currently not? You could also afford to space out the systems a bit more.
Better?
Ye
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
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