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Title: [DELETED] [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Zeta on May 19, 2018, 09:13:35 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Super Star
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Corkboard
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: masterhuffnpuff (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5402)


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mus/181) | MIDI (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/mid/181) | PDF (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/181)
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: masterhuffnpuff on May 19, 2018, 09:16:20 AM
Wow has it been a while.
I checked back and I saw that the original post was deleted along with some changes.
So, I am basically reuploading this submission that includes Sebastian's changes on the .mus file and just applied them to my pdf as well. Now that I have more time available, I hope to work on getting more stuff to this site.

Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Latios212 on May 19, 2018, 09:49:02 AM
Hi, welcome (back)!

Thanks for uploading the changes. As for the PDF, around here we generate them directly off of the .mus file - that way, we don't have to worry about making changes to different files, and everything will always be in sync. If you need help with that, I can generate it for you.

As for the arrangement, I have a couple of small comments:
- Courtesy A natural missing at the beginning of measure 7.
- I'd give some thought to beat 2 in the right hand of each measure. Having both a staccato and and augmentation dot is a little contradictory - see which one would be more appropriate here.
- What would you think of changing the right hand to treble clef? The last couple measures at least would be a bit easier to read. (Just attaching this for consideration - I'm not obligating you to. It's fine as is right now.)
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Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: masterhuffnpuff on May 19, 2018, 11:26:49 AM
Hi Latios,
I fixed the first two suggestions. Adding an accidental in the seventh measure was an easy fix. For the second beat, I just changed it to an eighth note with a sixteenth rest, just as a way to preserve the note length while keeping the notation simple.
As for the clef thing, the original submission I did back in February had the top staff as a treble clef but I changed it at the suggestion of one of the other updaters, Sebastian. I changed it back to a treble for now because I think it has the least amount of deviation from the main staff and because I like it better that way.
All relevant files have been edited in the submission form on the top.
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: masterhuffnpuff on May 19, 2018, 11:27:49 AM
Scratch that, I need to fix the footer in the .mus file. Forgive me, I'm not the best at finale software.
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: masterhuffnpuff on May 19, 2018, 11:37:09 AM
Okay, NOW the mus file should be good along with everything else. Sorry 'bout that.
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Latios212 on May 23, 2018, 06:03:46 PM
Hmm, looks like some formatting got messed up in the process. Here we use Finale to make all the changes on the .mus file as a master file, and then generate everything off of that so they'll all be in sync. Notepad can make that a challenge, so it's fine to seek help - sorry, I know this process can be a bit weird!

Use these files! (https://www.dropbox.com/sh/auk8svbrpe45d58/AAC6Zbs35ZHtPvUgXbI85xx-a?dl=0)
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: masterhuffnpuff on May 24, 2018, 04:34:20 PM
I just put the .mus and .musx files you provided into the submission. I'm gonna try working on getting a normal version of Finale, but for now Notepad was the best I could do without paying.
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Latios212 on May 24, 2018, 04:54:52 PM
Of course, that's understandable.

We do need to replace the .mid and .pdf files as well, though, as I mentioned above! I can handle this for you, no problem.
Quote from: Latios212 on May 23, 2018, 06:03:46 PMHere we use Finale to make all the changes on the .mus file as a master file, and then generate everything off of that so they'll all be in sync.

Let me know if you have other questions.
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Maelstrom on May 31, 2018, 11:03:03 AM
How's it coming, masterhuffnpuff?
Title: Re: [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by masterhuffnpuff
Post by: Sebastian on June 20, 2018, 08:43:44 AM
Archived for inactivity

Please try to respond quicker in the future. Also, feel free to resubmit this sheet with the requested changes at your convenience.