Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Temporal Spire
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)
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Awesome work. I trust your engraving choices, but just a few recommendations below:
- Bringing the forte up a little in M. 27 so it's more aligned with the other dynamics in that measure.
- Bringing the DS to the right a bit.
Either way, I approve.
Excellent sheet.
However, your composer/arranger data is kinda floating there. Maybe bring it down a little?
make mine and seb's adjustments and I approve
Made those adjustments (also moved the sub p up a bit to align it with the f). Thanks guys!!
Yippee.
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot