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Title: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Zeta on June 03, 2018, 01:09:55 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Super Monkey Ball
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Desert
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4960)

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Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Static on June 03, 2018, 01:10:11 PM

Edit: Sheet has been revised with repeat systems so it fits on 2 pages instead of 3.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Latios212 on June 04, 2018, 04:41:16 PM
Have you considered sempre 8vb? That entire left hand part is awfully low.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Static on June 04, 2018, 05:34:42 PM
I considered it now. The files have been edited.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: nacho2420 on July 01, 2018, 12:11:13 PM
Beautiful looking sheet!

I do hear G,C,G, (the C eing C4/middle C) as the RH voice instead of D,G,C. The rest of the chords would voice lead accordingly.

Also maybe make the "LH sempre 8vb" bigger? I was almost gonna comment about the LH colliding with the RH but I see the light now, lol

Good work!
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Static on July 01, 2018, 01:45:26 PM
Thanks for the feedback! I hear the top voice now, but I also hear the other voice I had with the D, so I moved that up and edited the voicing just a bit. It sounds much more full now, I think. I also made the LH sempre 8vb a bit bigger.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: nacho2420 on July 02, 2018, 12:04:36 AM
Glad it works for you!
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Sebastian on July 02, 2018, 10:29:44 AM
I don't have any further comments on this one. Looks good to me.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Latios212 on July 02, 2018, 03:41:27 PM
Looks great. Just a spacing comment - you've got ample room at the bottom of page 2, so you can move everything down so it's not so close to the header. You can also put 4/5 systems on each page if you want to flesh out the two sheets.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Static on July 15, 2018, 06:28:59 PM
I respaced the systems, it's a lot more even now.
Title: Re: [GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static
Post by: Zeta on July 15, 2018, 06:30:20 PM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot