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Title: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen / Game / Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Zeta on October 09, 2018, 12:22:55 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yume Nikki
Console: PC
Title: NASU Title Screen / Game / Game Over
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5243)

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Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on October 09, 2018, 12:25:24 AM
hopefully i did this right, also wow there is no good quality videos of the game over theme
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on October 09, 2018, 01:25:17 AM
Is there any particular reason (other than that they all have NASU in the title) to put all of these sheets together?  (I'm not familiar with Yume Nikki as you might have guessed.)

Also the fourth minim in NASU title screen in the left hand should be an F not an E.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on October 09, 2018, 11:54:34 AM
Yume Nikki has a super small minigame, called NASU. These are the tracks from the game.

also, fixed
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on October 10, 2018, 05:43:09 AM
So I might just be going crazy but in NASU game it doesn't sound like it's quite 4/4 to me (it seems a little longer).  Maybe consider putting a little pause sign at the end of each bar?
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Trasdegi on October 11, 2018, 04:42:20 AM
Quote from: Libera on October 10, 2018, 05:43:09 AMSo I might just be going crazy but in NASU game it doesn't sound like it's quite 4/4 to me (it seems a little longer).  Maybe consider putting a little pause sign at the end of each bar?

Hmm, if that's the case you should try writing it in 9/8
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on October 11, 2018, 09:17:13 AM
9/8 usually refers to compound 3/4.  Also I'm not sure the lengths work out quite like that.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Trasdegi on October 11, 2018, 12:05:57 PM
Quote from: Libera on October 11, 2018, 09:17:13 AM9/8 usually refers to compound 3/4.

That's what I was suggesting (rough draft of it:)
(https://i.imgur.com/rYJBdbg.png)

Haven't checked it against rwars' version, but this one also seems to line up.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on October 23, 2018, 01:26:12 PM
Alrighty, fixed NASU. I don't think the last note is a quarter, it feels more like 3 eighth notes though, trashdegi.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on October 23, 2018, 01:54:00 PM
Sweet.  Change the crotchet rest in the left hand of NASU in the first bar to two quaver rests though.  And since we're in 9/8 now give the tempo in terms of dotted crotchets.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on October 27, 2018, 06:22:14 AM
Alright, fixed. Almost had a math flub when trying to convert to dotted quarters, but I eventually got there.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on October 27, 2018, 07:09:33 AM
I think you changed the wrong rests (or maybe I said something wrong).  Either way it should look like this:

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/492809359961882625/505744073517432842/unknown.png

The rule is if it's on the beat it should be a crotchet rest, and if it's off the beat it should be two quaver rests.  It makes it easier to see where the beats are this way.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen/Game/Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Latios212 on November 03, 2018, 10:06:12 AM
One small thing in addition to the above, pad the / with spaces in the submission title.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen / Game / Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on November 06, 2018, 09:39:32 PM
Alright, fixed the rests, and changed the submission title.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen / Game / Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Libera on November 06, 2018, 11:58:30 PM
Yay.
Title: Re: [PC] Yume Nikki - "NASU Title Screen / Game / Game Over" by Rwars
Post by: Zeta on November 09, 2018, 03:47:56 PM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot