Submission Information:
Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: The Light Realm: Prologue
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: FiveNineSquared (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5296)
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hello it me again
There will probably be formatting errors which i can't fix on Finale Notepad.
Great song, and a really cool arrangement. Just a few things:
- General note/dynamic/articulation/slur/other stuff placement has been adjusted to give some parts a little more breathing room, but everything is still nice and compact on 2 pages.
- Measures 13 & 17 RH Beat 1.75: There are 2 Gs in both these spots that overlap when they should be F and G.
- Measure 20: Deleted the pedal bracket since the other pedal marking was already there.
- Measures 23 & 25: I flipped some of the 2nd layer notes up (like you did in one of the spots here) to allow for more space for the pedal markings.
- Measure 35: The Bn should be a Bb, so I changed it. I think it sounds a little too harsh when its up there next to the A, so it might be good to move some of the notes around. It's up to you though.
I went ahead and replaced the files for you with these changes I made.
Iterated on the above file with some more spacing adjustments and the like, fixed a couple of weird things that got messed up in the import.
Looks awesome!
Thanks guys!
I decided to remove the lower An in the last bar to reduce the dissonance a little, and shift up one articulation.
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot