Submission Information:
Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Beautiful Princess Elincia
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291)
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I was trying to work out what to submit this time last night and I complete forgot about this one.
Edit: I had another look through this and added in some extra notes at bar 26 and a double barline before the segno.
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This piece is pretty complex so I'm not 100% sure about everything I'm about to say...
- I think m. 9 LH beat 4 should match that of m. 10
- How about a staccato on m. 11 beat 2 melody?
- I'm hearing m. 12's melody in beats 1-2 as just F-Gb on beat 2 with nothing on beat 1. And Dn for m. 13 beat 1.
- m. 14 beat 2 - Bn on bottom?
- Is the G on beat 4 of m. 15 meant to be natural?
- I think m. 16 beat 3 is missing a Bb somewhere
- m. 23 should be a trill instead of a mordent
- In m. 35 shift the beat 3 layer 3 eighth note to the right slightly (like m. 27)
- Not so crazy about the octave jump down for the last measure RH. Maybe raise it back up to be consistent with the melody before it?
- E flat in the last dyad RH should be natural?
Yeah those all look like good changes to me; I've updated the files.
Although:
Quote from: Latios212 on February 16, 2019, 12:46:57 PM- E flat in the last dyad RH should be natural?
It should have been an Fb rather than an Eb (flat 9 chord) and the F in the previous dyad should have been an Fn. Either way it's fixed now.
Thanks for checking, I know this piece is a bit of a soup of sound.
No problem. Sounds good to me. It's got my approval!
Excelleng job!
accepted.
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).
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