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Title: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on August 18, 2019, 04:31:13 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Kingdom Hearts
Game: Kingdom Hearts
Console: PlayStation 2
Title: Once Upon a Time
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on August 18, 2019, 04:31:27 AM
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Latios212 on August 18, 2019, 05:32:22 PM
Looks great! Few small things:
- Spell Gb as F#
- Fermata over LH note in last measure too
- Probably better to use two systems, no need to squish
- https and footer outside page margins
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on August 18, 2019, 06:01:45 PM
I agree with each of your points and have adjusted the sheet to incorporate your recommendations.
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Latios212 on August 18, 2019, 06:21:49 PM
Awesome :D
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Libera on August 29, 2019, 12:24:05 AM
Notes look good to me.  The only thing I'd say is that the 8vas could start more to the left, and maybe the slurs and the 8vas could be a little lower.
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on August 29, 2019, 12:51:46 AM
Notes look good to me.  The only thing I'd say is that the 8vas could start more to the left, and maybe the slurs and the 8vas could be a little lower.
Done and done :D
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Libera on August 29, 2019, 12:54:18 AM
Cool cool.  Accepting!
Title: Re: [PS2] Kingdom Hearts - "Once Upon a Time" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on August 29, 2019, 12:54:24 AM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot