Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Zelda's Lullaby (File Select)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4766)
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I know Zelda's Lullaby isn't the only old piece present but its the main melody, and I put (File Select) for clarification. I'm not sure if it should be swung 16th notes instead of triplets in those spots, but I can change it if need be
Interesting rhythm. Don't think I've seen something written out this way before, though I don't have any objections at the moment - seems easy enough to read.
Looking pretty good, here's my feedback!
- List Koji Kondo as a composer for obvious reasons
- Adjust inner ties in chord in m. 12
- In m. 13-14 the bass voice seems to stay the same (Ab/Bb) throughout the measure. I think it may be better to have the beat 3 bass notes stay there as well.
- Shorten the stems on the cross-staffed part in m. 14. They're a bit long as is
- I think this is better written in C major (blank keysig)
Alrighty, done
Cool
Just a few things:
-Be careful with cross staffing in bar 14: you're missing the flats on the Bbs in the upper staff.
-The rhythm in bar 21 beat 3 sounds the same as in bar 20 to me, i.e. a triplet quaver rhythm.
Good catch, thanks! It's been updated
Sweet. All checks out to me!
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot