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Title: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lullab
Post by: Zeta on August 31, 2019, 07:58:59 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Zelda's Lullaby (File Select)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4766)

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Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Zeila on August 31, 2019, 08:02:01 PM
I know Zelda's Lullaby isn't the only old piece present but its the main melody, and I put (File Select) for clarification. I'm not sure if it should be swung 16th notes instead of triplets in those spots, but I can change it if need be
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Latios212 on September 01, 2019, 02:49:06 PM
Interesting rhythm. Don't think I've seen something written out this way before, though I don't have any objections at the moment - seems easy enough to read.

Looking pretty good, here's my feedback!
- List Koji Kondo as a composer for obvious reasons
- Adjust inner ties in chord in m. 12
- In m. 13-14 the bass voice seems to stay the same (Ab/Bb) throughout the measure. I think it may be better to have the beat 3 bass notes stay there as well.
- Shorten the stems on the cross-staffed part in m. 14. They're a bit long as is
- I think this is better written in C major (blank keysig)
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Zeila on September 01, 2019, 08:36:20 PM
Alrighty, done
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Latios212 on September 03, 2019, 04:09:59 PM
Cool
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Libera on September 07, 2019, 04:51:44 PM
Just a few things:

-Be careful with cross staffing in bar 14: you're missing the flats on the Bbs in the upper staff.
-The rhythm in bar 21 beat 3 sounds the same as in bar 20 to me, i.e. a triplet quaver rhythm.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Zeila on September 07, 2019, 05:06:28 PM
Good catch, thanks! It's been updated
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lu
Post by: Libera on September 07, 2019, 05:09:22 PM
Sweet.  All checks out to me!
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Cadence of Hyrule: Crypt of the NecroDancer Featuring The Legend of Zelda - "Zelda's Lullab
Post by: Zeta on September 07, 2019, 05:10:41 PM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot