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Title: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on September 10, 2019, 07:03:18 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari)
Console: PC
Title: Balcony
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4780)

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Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on September 10, 2019, 07:03:33 PM
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Libera on September 11, 2019, 03:24:10 PM
Notes look good to me, just got some small miscellaneous things to say.

-You could make the echo notes slightly smaller if you wanted to make it more readable, but it's not strictly necessary.
-The second layer is so low in bars 9-16 that you could easily just put the first layer rests in their usual position.
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Latios212 on September 12, 2019, 03:51:11 PM
I approve once the above comments have been resolved
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Th3Gavst3r on September 22, 2019, 10:57:53 AM
Quote from: Libera on September 11, 2019, 03:24:10 PM-The second layer is so low in bars 9-16 that you could easily just put the first layer rests in their usual position.
Definitely added this

Quote from: Libera on September 11, 2019, 03:24:10 PM-You could make the echo notes slightly smaller if you wanted to make it more readable, but it's not strictly necessary.
Played around with the sizing for a while. I think it's more easily read now and gets the point across
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Libera on September 22, 2019, 10:59:43 AM
Cool cool, accept I shall.
Title: Re: [PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Balcony" by Th3Gavst3r
Post by: Zeta on September 22, 2019, 10:59:48 AM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot