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Title: Samusthedude's arrangements
Post by: Samusthedude on November 18, 2019, 10:32:45 AM
Hey all, just finished formatting an arrangement. Any feedback would be appreciated.

The piece is Corridor from Persona 4 for ps2.

(.musx for newest finale) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1NbR74bUTTq9CfYuEOaqeB8yeTtjRPXay)
(Pdf) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gF3_rHYx8W3oKlewc_P7hLbFwNrotplj)
(.mus for older finale) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=17dnMONl_6ZkV_NNoIXqJSFjg0fOI5i6X)

Here's the original for comparison

Got another arrangement, this one's "The Voice Someone Calls" from Persona 3. It was a serious formatting challenge so any feedback is really appreciated!
(Folder with all the files) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1xZnu0qpeoy2hVHsz9pCKo79bvV6P1z5z)

Here's the video I worked off of.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXEk7Ip9pGk (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXEk7Ip9pGk)
Title: Re: Samusthedude's 1st arrangement
Post by: Latios212 on November 18, 2019, 04:39:34 PM
Ooh wow, great job for a first sheet, and nice to see more Persona stuff!

Just taking a glance at the moment, but overall this is quite clean and accurate. Some of the right hand quarter notes in the beginning section should be triads though - for instance, m. 1 is missing F on top, m. 2 is missing E on top, m. 5 is missing B flat. Give them another look to double check you've got all the pitches.

Hope to see more! :)
Title: Re: Samusthedude's 1st arrangement
Post by: Samusthedude on December 21, 2019, 04:30:41 PM
Thanks for the advice, I appreciate the feedback. I've made the changes and submitted.
Title: Re: Samusthedude's arrangements
Post by: Samusthedude on February 21, 2020, 02:00:12 PM
Quote from: Samusthedude on November 18, 2019, 10:32:45 AMGot another arrangement, this one's "The Voice Someone Calls" from Persona 3. It was a serious formatting challenge so any feedback is really appreciated!
(Folder with all the files) (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1xZnu0qpeoy2hVHsz9pCKo79bvV6P1z5z)

Here's the video I worked off of.