Welcome to my arrangement thread! Feel free to give any comments or feedback on any of my work!
On-site Arrangements (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/browse/arranger/6076)
Chicory: A Colorful Tale| New | "Teatime Meadows" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1PXWKOswg6QXZ45RdDuRVjxb3CrdOnmEg) |
Fez| "Majesty" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Awu1olR0bUWoyoWWjxDuHBgkwJ8ml8AJ) |
Kirby Star Allies| "Frostak's Cold Land" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1UvwSQAtrKY8vQnNzPBQ8wP5hdpnYxFij) |
Luigi's Mansion 3| "Catching Ghost in the Hotel Shops" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1b4YwkWYuUAiVg1EnEbKwjXD3tDXVFZkv) |
Paper Mario: The Origami King| "Musée Champignon" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1jPs05ZQPgcuSpNecp-2IzMTDnBXR0yMB) |
Pokémon Sword & Pokémon Shield| "Stow-on-Side" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ljlFIHjqpQC3xxnwATsj8in4GDoZ_SQF) |
TUNIC| New | "Sunset Breakfast" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1t1eKDz2mXbMPl-xSVludY2pTTFuJVWSW) |
(reserved for future use)
My first arrangements posted on the forum!
Luigi's Mansion 3| "Catching Ghost in the Hotel Shops" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/open?id=1b4YwkWYuUAiVg1EnEbKwjXD3tDXVFZkv) | (pdf, mid, mp3, mscz) |
Pokémon Sword & Pokémon Shield| "Stow-on-Side" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1ljlFIHjqpQC3xxnwATsj8in4GDoZ_SQF) | (pdf, mid, mp3, mscz) |
A new sheet for the winter holidays!
Kirby Star Allies| "Frostak's Cold Land" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1UvwSQAtrKY8vQnNzPBQ8wP5hdpnYxFij) | (pdf, mid, mp3, mscz) |
One of the many alternate versions of the title theme of the new Paper Mario game!
Paper Mario: The Origami King| "Musée Champignon" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1jPs05ZQPgcuSpNecp-2IzMTDnBXR0yMB) | (pdf, mid, mp3, mscz) |
Musée Champignon sounds great, here's some feedback for it
- m3 RH beat 3 sounds arpeggiated
- m8 LH beat 3.5 should be D# instead of F#
- m11 RH beat 1 missing F#
- m13 LH beat 3 missing B
- m16 LH beat 4.25 maybe this would be better as a mordent w/ a natural accidental, although if you want to keep it as is that's fine with me
- m21 RH beat 3
should be dotted eighth + sixteenth note triplet instead of using 32nd notes oops I just realized that wouldn't make sense, but it sounds like it starts on what would be the 4th sixteenth note so I guess either a sixteenth w/ a mordent would be better or a 32nd note triplet - m27 RH beat 4 C# should be lowered an octave
- m28 RH beat 3 missing G#
- m31 LH beat 1 I only hear the bottom E note of the octave
- m38 RH beat 3 G# sounds like E instead
- why did you write m28 LH beat 1-2 different from m40 LH beat 3-4
- m41 RH beat 1 missing eighth rest
- m44 RH you should flip the first eighth note group so the stem direction is facing downwards
Hey this looks great (I missed your earlier posts) :P
You should submit these sheets!
Quote from: Zeila on July 21, 2020, 05:13:01 PMMusée Champignon sounds great, here's some feedback for it
- m16 LH beat 4.25 maybe this would be better as a mordent w/ a natural accidental, although if you want to keep it as is that's fine with me
- why did you write m28 LH beat 1-2 different from m40 LH beat 3-4
Thanks for the feedback! I notated m16 as is to emphasize similarity of the two halves of the measure. I might have forgotten to edit m28 after adding invisible pedal lines to the sheet. The remaining feedback have been addressed and the files are updated.
Quote from: Latios212 on July 21, 2020, 05:23:26 PMHey this looks great (I missed your earlier posts) :P
You should submit these sheets!
Thanks! I will be submitting Musée Champignon soon and perhaps the others as well.
Celebrating 10th anniversary of Fez!
Fez| "Majesty" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Awu1olR0bUWoyoWWjxDuHBgkwJ8ml8AJ) |
Comfy tunes from Finji games ^v^
Chicory: A Colorful Tale| "Teatime Meadows" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1PXWKOswg6QXZ45RdDuRVjxb3CrdOnmEg) |
TUNIC| "Sunset Breakfast" | FILES (https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1t1eKDz2mXbMPl-xSVludY2pTTFuJVWSW) |