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Title: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Zeta on January 18, 2020, 12:57:17 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario 3D World
Console: Wii U
Title: Getting Ready
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Splatoon Inkling (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5495)
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: LeviR.star on January 18, 2020, 01:02:50 AM
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: mastersuperfan on January 18, 2020, 01:43:35 AM
- Tempo should be 112 BPM, not 120.
- A courtesy C# would be appreciated in m3 LH. You could also put one in m8 RH but the LH is already playing a C# so it's not necessary.
- I would extend the RH half notes in m2/3/6 to dotted half notes since they keep ringing until the next note is played.
- I would separate the bass note and chords in m4 into LH and RH because beat 2.5 has both a chord and a bass note (you're missing the bass note). I also think you should make the last chord a dotted quarter note (sustains until the end of the measure).
- You're missing a note in m7/8 RH—it should look like this:
(https://i.imgur.com/nwUhTbl.png)

- You're also missing the first bass note in m8. I would split the chord and bass notes into two different layers and write it like this:(https://i.imgur.com/Nk3j6kq.png)
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Latios212 on January 18, 2020, 01:47:08 AM
Just popping in to say this looks great for a first sheet ^^

Also, we have specific composer info for this one! It's just Mahito Yokota: https://www.mariowiki.com/Super_Mario_3D_World_Original_Soundtrack (https://www.mariowiki.com/Super_Mario_3D_World_Original_Soundtrack)
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Splatoon Inkling on January 18, 2020, 07:28:13 PM
Done! So Levi has been helping me format and fix the sheet in this learning process. I did however leave out the courtesies. Thank you msf and Latios for the feedback!
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: LeviR.star on January 18, 2020, 07:35:53 PM
- A courtesy C# would be appreciated in m3 LH. You could also put one in m8 RH but the LH is already playing a C# so it's not necessary.

A courtesy C# would not be needed. Look, I'm all for courtesy accidentals when the time is right, but beats 1 - 2 of the left hand in measure 3 are no different than they are in measure 1, so there should be no reason for the performer to assume the C4 is still natural from measure 2. If they do, it's their own fault for ignoring music's basic fundamentals.



Off-topic, but now that you guys know I've been helping him, I think this submission process would go even more smoothly if things are explained a little more thoroughly for Splatoon Inkling. He's just starting out, and I can't be here all the time to help him format his sheets, so please feel free to give him some tips here and there, like these:

- courtesy accidentals can be toggled with the P key
- use a Tempo Tapper (https://www.all8.com/tools/bpm.htm) to determine the tempo of a song easily
- to switch layers, check the bottom left corner of the screen:

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/264591162315112448/668163412160938044/unknown.png)

I'll pop in whenever I can; good luck sheeting, Inkling!
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Latios212 on January 18, 2020, 07:39:01 PM
Done! So Levi has been helping me format and fix the sheet in this learning process. I did however leave out the courtesies. Thank you msf and Latios for the feedback!
You're welcome :)

A courtesy C# would not be needed. Look, I'm all for courtesy accidentals when the time is right, but beats 1 - 2 of the left hand in measure 3 are no different than they are in measure 1, so there should be no reason for the performer to assume the C4 is still natural from measure 2. If they do, it's their own fault for ignoring music's basic fundamentals.
Yeah, I would recommend keeping them out here as well.

Last couple things from me before I sign off on this one:
- Flip the bottom tie between the last two measures upwards. You can flip ties by selecting the first note and pressing Ctrl+F
- I would recommend writing m. 3 like this by moving beats 4-4.5 to the right hand to make it a bit easier to play (since the high voice in the original dies out before the measure ends anyway)
(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/401094846107877377/668161724347580416/unknown.png)
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Splatoon Inkling on January 18, 2020, 08:56:40 PM
Done!
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Latios212 on January 18, 2020, 08:59:44 PM
Awesome! Approved :)
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Libera on February 02, 2020, 07:50:27 PM
Notes check out and everything.  I also got your articulations due to v26 issues (also for some reasons the staccatos in bar 3 weren't applying in playback so I fixed that as well).
Title: Re: [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Getting Ready" by Splatoon Inkling
Post by: Zeta on February 02, 2020, 07:50:35 PM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot