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Title: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Zeta on May 25, 2020, 04:59:04 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Castlevania
Game: Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: The Gears Go Awry
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Atcero (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4216)

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Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on May 25, 2020, 05:00:52 PM
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Static on June 28, 2020, 12:44:52 PM
Engraving/Theory

Notes/Arranging

Text/Formatting

From looking at the sheet, it looks like you use MuseScore, but you also provided a .musx file. I'm not sure about your setup, but if you need any help making these changes let me know and I can do them for you.
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on June 30, 2020, 04:43:45 PM
I'll get to that all this weekend, thank you! I have the trial for Finale right now but I do most of the OG stuff in musescore, and I try to catch everything the conversion misses but I still miss a lot sadly. I'm still pretty terrible at using Finale so I might take you up on some of formatting I can't do.
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on July 04, 2020, 04:24:23 PM
Ok I got everything done except the formatting, which I will definitely need help with, and these two:

Quotem9: Keep the spellings in this measure the same.
m37-44 LH: The ties between beats 1 and 2 should all be flipped down to highlight the slightly different note length of the top note.

I didn't quite understand what you mean by those two.
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on July 07, 2020, 04:34:48 PM
I believe everythings all up to date now!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Static on July 21, 2020, 12:01:32 AM
Looks great! The only thing is that after m12, there are still a bunch of G naturals and D naturals; all of those should be F or C double-sharps, respectively. Also, the tie in m38 should be flipped. The offbeat 16ths should also be C naturals instead of A naturals.

That's all I have left for this one, nice work.
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on July 30, 2020, 05:16:03 PM
Its all updated (minus the MUSX file since I lost my Finale trial) but it should be good to go!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Static on July 30, 2020, 05:29:46 PM
Added the musx for ya, and with that I'll be approving this one. Looks good!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on July 30, 2020, 06:32:52 PM
Thanks so much for all your help! I really appreciate it!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Atcero on August 02, 2020, 07:38:11 PM
Looks good! Thanks for the help Static and Latios!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Latios212 on August 02, 2020, 07:41:03 PM
Final feedback!

In general, there are a number of places where a single layer plays a quarter tied to eighth rhythm on beat 1 / beat 3. This is better condensed into a dotted quarter.

Aside from that, I went through the sheet with Atcero and corrected a few transcription errors here and there. They include:
- Melody in second half of m. 6/10
- Melody in beat 1 of m. 16
- Bass in m. 14
- Bass in m. 33 and 45
- Melody in m. 22-23
- Melody in m. 26
- Beat 2/4 melody in m. 28-29
- Added harmony in m. 30-31
- Harmony in m. 33-34
- Lowered RH of m. 46 an octave to transition better with the parts around it
- Added some more bass notes in the last few measures and corrected pitch (Cx) in m. 49 beats 3-4

Take a quick look over to see if I've messed anything up - if this all looks good to you, will accept this one! :D

edit: ninja'd haha, accepting now! Happy first sheet accepted!
Title: Re: [NDS] Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin - "The Gears Go Awry" by Atcero
Post by: Zeta on August 02, 2020, 07:41:10 PM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot