Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: To the Moon
Console: PC
Title: Once Upon a Memory (Piano)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212 (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4344)
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In this innocent little piano solo... a discreet but unmistakable usage of a 15/16 time signature!
Sounds and looks great! Some small things:
- m2 and m3 beat 2 sound like they should be arpeggiated, and m3 is missing an A
- m26 beat 2.5 sounds like the G and B are arpeggiated but it's fair if you want to omit that; beat 5 the G sounds like it should be an E instead
Oops, thanks for the corrections! Left m. 26 beat 2.5 as is but fixed the rest :)
Beautiful.
- The F on m17 LH beat 3 should be raised an octave.
- Do you want to put a poco rit. somewhere near the end?
Thanks!
- Oops, fixed
- Makes sense, added in m. 26
Files updated :)
Last few small things that I missed the first time around:
- m15 LH, the A sixteenth note in the sounds like it's tied to the quarter instead of being re-articulated.
- m15 RH, I don't hear the D in the dotted quarter.
- m22 RH, do you want to flip the quarter note up on the last beat?
that is all
i give this sheet a 15 out of 16
Thanks again! The adjustments to m. 15 sound good; I'd rather leave that note in m. 22 as is though. It's flipped down everywhere else and doesn't really cause any clashes here.
nice, approved
Man, do I love the To the Moon soundtrack. Awesome work, Lat! : )
Accepted
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).
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