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Title: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Zeta on August 09, 2020, 05:35:42 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Undertale
Game: Deltarune
Console: PC
Title: Your Power
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=4424)
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Yug_Guy on August 09, 2020, 05:35:56 PM
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Maelstrom on August 15, 2020, 12:14:04 AM
wow this is such a difficult song how did you manage to arrange it

approval
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Bespinben on August 15, 2020, 03:22:44 AM
Notate the bass line with ledger lines instead of ottava. With keyboard music, the player will typically read the top note and then infer the octave doubling.
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Libera on August 16, 2020, 07:23:25 PM
Notate the bass line with ledger lines instead of ottava. With keyboard music, the player will typically read the top note and then infer the octave doubling.

I agree with this.

Also:
-url/copyright not aligned to bottom margin.
-There's this string harmony that comes in over the top at the end that makes the harmony at bit more interesting (sounds like an Eb and Ab to me).  You might be interested in including that, maybe as a higher up chord in the final bar?  Might work nicely.
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Yug_Guy on August 18, 2020, 01:27:04 AM
Notate the bass line with ledger lines instead of ottava. With keyboard music, the player will typically read the top note and then infer the octave doubling.
I agree with this.
-url/copyright not aligned to bottom margin.
-There's this string harmony that comes in over the top at the end that makes the harmony at bit more interesting (sounds like an Eb and Ab to me).  You might be interested in including that, maybe as a higher up chord in the final bar?  Might work nicely.
Done.
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Libera on August 19, 2020, 11:38:14 PM
Sweet, accepting.
Title: Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
Post by: Zeta on August 19, 2020, 11:38:24 PM
This submission has been accepted by Libera (https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=5291).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot